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Reviews for One Cold Morning

By : Nyxx
  • From ANON - mrowrr on November 01, 2005
    very well written. but....damn. that gave me the chills. *shudders*
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  • From ANON - angel on November 01, 2005
    wow ....man ... snape who are you going to win her back ..... please update soon i would like to read what will happen next ...
    later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on November 01, 2005
    I don't like reading angst, but I was curious. You did a great job with the writing here, even though it was hard to read. I also believe that Snape would not do anything as you have just described here. Such a sad ending though, too bad he jumped to conclusions. I can understand her for leaving.

    The romantic in my begs for maybe something more. An act of redemption on his part, forgiveness on hers. *gives puppy dog eyes*

    But if you choose to leave it as this, it works well.

    Again, nice work.
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  • From ANON - Susan on November 01, 2005
    Well written if vicious...but you said that. Just because someone might not like the content of a story does not mean it isn't well written. I think your author's notes sum it up well. You did a fantastic job of making Snape truly blind with rage. Thanks for having Hermione have the courage to leave him. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 01, 2005
    Since you're openly soliciting any and all types of criticism, here's my two cents worth:

    MY main beef with this story was not necessarily the over-the-top evil characterization of Snape, but rather what you've done with Hermione - turning what should be a brave, intellectually gifted young woman into an almost spineless victim. Unfortunately, you're by no means the only fanfic writer to do so. True, you've presented your readers with little background to the story and their relationship, so maybe she's had a lobotomy of which the readers are unaware, but I find it a bit disappointing that Hermione would simply slink away out of some sense of political correctness rather than exact some sort of revenge preceded by "Why the fuck didn't I realize earlier what kind of brute he is?!" epiphany.

    The absence of any eroticism whatsoever in this story is, of course, obvious and perhaps intended.

    Please don't be too hard on Rowling just yet. I have a sneaking suspicion she's got surprises up her sleeve which will be revealed in Book 7; she's hinted at Snape's redemption more than once in media interviews.

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