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Reviews for One Cold Morning

By : Nyxx
  • From ANON - Kerry on August 11, 2015
    I've never been more thankful that JK Rowling owns these characters and not someone like you, than I am now. If I could flame you, I would.
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  • From ANON - Kerry on August 11, 2015
    I hate this story. I can't believe someone would actually write something like this and be praised. You say that you think he would have done this because of the HBP ending, yes he retaliated finally. However it's a far cry from brutally raping a woman, no less his wife. He's not a monster. It disturbed me and I'm not ashamed to say I cried. I just can't understand how someone can write something like this and put it out there for the world to see and be happy about it. Your summary is misleading.Omw, this is so disturbing
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  • From Snowhite77 on December 19, 2007
    I think that this fic, though OOC, is really good. I don't believe Snape could be capable of rape either, but I can see him acting this way--in a fiction, that is--if he thinks his wife has betrayed him with Harry (who happens to be the son of the man who took the woman he loved away from him). I think, however, that you should add some more chapters to this one-shot; it would be your occasion to "explain" how Snape ended up being the way he is now (not that it justifies what he did to Hermione: rape is a always a despicable action). Also, I think it would be interesting following the developments of Hermione's life after this accident. Yes... there are a lot of things that still need to be written, and I think it would be... intriguing if you added some other chaps to this story.

    Snowhite77
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 09, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 22, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Ami on February 06, 2006
    I loved it! Though, I am in agreement with you. I don't believe that Snape is capable of injuring a woman. That would seem to be much too cowardly for him. And as we all know, he hates to seen as, (or called), a coward. I am also in agreement about Snape's innocense. I think that his role is far from over and there are some things that are hidden between the lines, so to speak, regarding his character. Although, even if he A.K's every single other character in the book, I'll STILL love him!

    In short. Great work! I love your writing style. You have talent and I'm adding this story to my rec list.

    ~Ami
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  • From ANON - Eleriel on January 05, 2006
    Goodness...this story was indescribable. At first, when he started getting angry, I was a bit confused that Hermione would be happy when it seemed like he had been abusing her for a while, and the bit after that and the rape scene seemed like something that might have happened between Snape's parents, so I was a bit confused.

    But then when he realized what he had done, just the depth of the emotion present nearly made me cry. Poor Snape, to have to deal with having done that.

    Anyway, I thought your story was very well-written, with an excellent ending. My only complaint is that Snape seemed a bit OOC.
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  • From ANON - olivia on December 31, 2005
    hey, i gotta say, this is one of the best rape stories iv read in a long time. seriously. specially since they were married. update soon. very good. keep up the good wrk.

    olivia
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  • From ANON - Auburn (srry!) on December 30, 2005
    Last comment...I promise!!!
    The present part, isn't it usual for best friends to send presents to each other? I mean, Snape got mad at the present. Didn't he see it before hand and see the baby jumper?
    Also, Snape seemed a tad bit...ok, I admit very...cruel when Hermione said that he didn't like her spending time with her friends. What's up with him?

    ~Auburn~
    Email me if you update ;) auburn.silver@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - Auburn (again) on December 30, 2005
    Hello again,

    I know...2 reviews? Well, I had to reread the story and add more to my review. I think that you protrayed Hermione as too much of a spineless woman who doesn't have the courage to stand up to her husband. Hermione's character is different from this. However, I applaud the fact that you changed the way she acted at the end and she decided to leave. Snape...again. After rereading, I think that if you ever write a sequel, (which I hope you do) he should try to control his feelings more and not act so cruel when he does lose control. And the fact that Harry and Hermione were having fun without Ron? Well, from the point I see it, Harry and Hermione are usually calm and subdued around each other because they can't really relate that much. I mean, Ron and Harry seem more connected and seem to have fun due to their similarities and hobbies. Hermione is more like the person Harry would share his feelings with and talk seriously with. So, the tickling part seemed weird to me. I'll stop lecturing now and try not to say anything else. But please, if you have the time, write a sequel.

    ~Aubrun~
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  • From ANON - Auburn on December 30, 2005
    Hello Nyxx,

    This is the first fanfic that I have read ever written by you. I think it's truly magnificient and I agree, Snape would never do such a thing. However, this story leaves me at a cliffhanger. I would love to know if you'll write more chapters to it or a sequel. If you do, feel free to email it to me. I would truly appreciate it.

    Your fan,
    Auburn
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  • From ANON - eh.. on December 30, 2005
    Incredibly unreal? ....Doesn't sound like how they'd act together...what do I know though.
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  • From ANON - Citten on December 29, 2005
    Well.... what can i say i love hermione and severus stories so i am hopeing for the best and the ending to be somewhat of a soft romance, mostly because i am with you i don't think him capable of such a thing. Well here is to hopein' (lifts glass in slaute) :)
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  • From Ronni on December 28, 2005
    awsome story..... the angst was unberable....

    pllllleeeeaaassseee continue it!!!

    i beg of you
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  • From ANON - anon on December 28, 2005
    Dark and extremely sad. Pretty well-written, though both Hermione and Snape were OOC, but this is fanfic so you have artistic license to interpret them how you want. Either way, I'd love to see a sequel or more chapters of this!
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