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By : RAB
  • From ANON - SnapesGirly on November 05, 2005
    It's me your first reviewer!I am really enjoying your story and I cannot wait until you beta it so I can print it out and keep it with my other fan fiction that Im mast fond of!I Love Snapey!I Love Snapey!Keep adding until your finished!!!
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  • From ANON - Divine Angel on November 05, 2005
    It isn't rude or mean or any such thing to point out, constructively, where the author could improve. Especially when it is their spelling and grammar, which is so painfully easy to correct and will be beneficial to the author in real life as well as here. Anyone who can't take such criticism has no business contributing. If this author wants people to read and enjoy the story then these issues to need to be addressed. I'm afraid I only managed a few paragraphs before having to give up. From what these reviews say, I'm sure your plot is great and I would certainly return to read it if you reposted the chapters you have so far with betad versions. I don't want to discourage you, by any means, keep writing and enjoy it!!
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on November 05, 2005
    Thank you for updating that fast. I am really enjoing your story.
    The storyline is great and original.

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - Laura on November 04, 2005
    Good story so far. My problem is that while I think it is a good story, it's true that the spelling and punctuation errors distract from it. A lot. My advice would be to have a beta go over each chapter before you post it. Maybe flesh out the conversations a bit more.

    I have the feeling that Snape is NOT having sex with Bella, there's something going on that we aren't privy to yet, and he still wants Hermione. I hope she realizes she'd be using Ron if she goes further with him. Maybe it's previous stories but it feels like she's getting with her brother when she kisses Ron! So to those who are bitching that this isn't a Snape/Hermione story- get over it. A lot of fics start out w/ them apart and even with other people first. (*gasp!*)

    Don't be discouraged but consider beta-ing before you're finished with the entire story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2005
    Sethy are you hitting on the author? !!!
    ...I just want you to know if Snape ends up shagging her in detention?
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  • From ANON - sethyrothy on November 04, 2005
    Hey author are you a girl or a boy?::Blushes::....I liked your story...and I like you!
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  • From ANON - Killmeslow on November 04, 2005
    I thought everyone new that snape/hermione fiction was that they were the main characters?Are people that thick?
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  • From ANON - septentrion on November 04, 2005
    I'm really cuious about what's going to happen . Will Hermione stay confused a very long time ? Will she tell Severus about her pregnancy ? And what about her friends ? Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2005
    Snape&Hermione fiction is where they are the main characters I have to agree.I have read tons of fan fics that where Snape and Hermione that had them killing one another and shit.They don't have to end up together but Im sure that is what most of you fan girls want!Why don't you just write your own fic abou them?Liked the story by the by.
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  • From ANON - KittyKat on November 04, 2005
    I understand what your saying Irene but actually Snape/Hermione fan fiction is when they are the main character's and im not trying to be rude either Im just stating a fact!You can not have a good Snape/Hermione fan fic without a good plot and I think the author is making good use of it.If the only people that were in this story was Severus and Hermione and there were no plot twists it would get boring real quick.The only time I like to see a Snape/Hermione fic with only them as the characters is when its a *One shot/smut fic!And if you don't want to read it anymore then DON'T because for someone who is not trying to be rude you really could have kept that to yourself.I love your story author and im just letting you know that this is defently a good Snape/Hermione fic.You kind of need a Beta but you already seem to know that!Your plot is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    P.S:Sorry for the long review but I had to say what I was thinking.Oh and to everyone else who was rude on this review...all I have to say is GET A LIFE!!!:)
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  • From ANON - Irene on November 04, 2005
    Why is it that everyone who reads a story and likes it feels the need to write something mean about a person who is less enthused about that story?? The whole point of reviewing is to post ur opinion. So anyone telling other people to shut up, Needs to shut up, it just makes you sound like the idiot you are. I agree with Anon, and anyone saying "She has perfect grammar...look at your own." i do recall that those very people were saying "i beleave" ...maybe you didn't know this but this is how you spell--> "believe". Anywho, this whole lets attack anyone who doesn't have the same opinion as me thing needs to stop, it's something we all have gone through in Elementry and should have left it there.
    To the Author: I like you story, but I'm hating the whole "Hermoine/Ron" so I don't believe i will continue reading it. I do believe you put this in the Hermoine/Snape category. And no Hermoine/Snape does not just mean that they are the main characters in the story, it means that they are the main couple in the story. And if you don't plan on having them end up together then don't put it in that category, its fairly simple.
    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2005
    Will Ron or Harry ever find out that she's pregnant?Im interested to see what is going to happen!
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  • From ANON - HermioneKnows! on November 04, 2005
    Can I be your Beta!!!I love your story!!!xoxoxo
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  • From ANON - RAB on November 04, 2005
    Yes,HermioneandSeverousfan I will call upon you to be my Beta after I have finished all of the chapters.Thanks for the review!
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on November 04, 2005
    Hello I just want to let you know my offer still stands if you want a beta. And good chapter
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