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Reviews for Love or Lust?

By : RAB
  • From ANON - DragonSlayer69 on November 03, 2005
    The author never exactly said that Snape was fucking the other girl?I mean they are'nt married so how do you know if they are or not?And yes,Snape/Hermione fiction can be about anything as long as they are the main characters!
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  • From ANON - HermioneG. on November 03, 2005
    Anon you are so stupid!Snape/Hermione fiction means that they are both main character's in the story!It can have sex,romance,dueling and anything like that in it!It does not have to have sex in it that is why the author put O for other!You are such a noob!Learn your fiction or don't post!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2005
    i do not see this as a hermione and severus story. you have him fucking another woman. the hermione/snape section should only be for stories that have hermione and severus having sex with each and other not other people.
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  • From ANON - FairyHermione on November 03, 2005
    I have to agree with Sam and say that most of you people really need to get a life!Most of you telling this person that they need a Beta can't even spell or use caps!I love the story and can not wait for you to write more!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on November 03, 2005
    You need a beta.
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  • From ANON - Fangirl on November 03, 2005
    Every time I see the name Anon on a review it makes me want to puke!
    You just keep writing honey and do not listen to most of these retards!
    If you do not have something nice to say then move on!
    It really shows what kind of people they are in real life.(People I would not want to know!)
    Anyways,I think your story is really good and I liked what you wrote on the review page.
    If you can take what these bastards have to say and not complain...your a better person than me!

    xoxoHugs & Kisses xoxo
    Fangirl
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2005
    I believe it's important that you get this beta'd as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on November 03, 2005
    So, Hermione is knocked up? Does she loose the baby - is that what the pain is? Will she tell Snape? Or does he over hear someone's conversation about "Poor Hermione all alone"? If not that, What could it be???
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  • From ANON - RAB on November 03, 2005
    Thank you everyone for your honesty!I would like a Beta to go over my work,but after I complete the story.Other than the mistakes I made I do hope everyone has at least enjoyed the plot!Im going to try to add another chapter soon,but sometimes my work gets in the way.I will add to the story as soon as I can!
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  • From ANON - JenKM1216 on November 03, 2005
    Hey, I just couldn't finish because of all the punctuation and spelling errors. I read about half before I realized I had no clue what was going all due to reading around all of the mistakes. If you need help, I would be more than happy to beta for you. I myself just started writing recently and know from experience that no matter how good you are, you always need help. Email me and let me know if you need any assistance.

    Jenny
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on November 03, 2005
    I don`t think you have made that many mistakes. But if you would like a Beta mail me.

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on November 03, 2005
    I hope you will update soon!
    This will be very interesting. It will be fun to see how Hermione deals with the situation.
    Will there be a happy end? Pleeeeaaaase!!!

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - Castaspell on November 03, 2005
    Im hooked on your story.Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lovealot on November 03, 2005
    I actually think your grammar is quite astute and I can not wait until you update!
    I don't think you need a beta...there just jealous of your talent.
    You get alot of stupid people reviewing on these sights!

    From Lovealot!
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  • From ANON - kelstar on November 02, 2005
    You need a beta, the mistakes are numerous and distracting. The plot however is based on a sound premise, and it could be a very good story, but unless you get a beta and your spelling and grammar sorted then I don't think I will continue reading.
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