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Reviews for Heat In The Dungeons

By : sweetxxxginny
  • From ANON - Apocrypha on January 03, 2007
    Man, I like your ideas, but I just have to say this. I hope you won't take this the wrong way, just a little constructive criticism: WAYY-hoo-WAYYYYYYYYYYY too many run-on sentences, inproper punctuation, bad spelling, places where you should have a space where you don't... You NEED to try to fix this, or get a beta, but this story is just barely legible! Sorry x(
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  • From ANON - Katy on January 14, 2006
    I think that you should continue with this story...it is really good! I would love to see how it ends...if you need any ideas...e-mail me.
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  • From on November 05, 2005
    The general idea was good, and I loved the action.

    But you need to fix the grammar and typos that are littered throughout the story. It just makes it look dirty, and with the correct punctuation, this chapter could shine.

    I hope you fix it, and then make more chapters. I LOVE IT.
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  • From ANON - sweetxxxginny on November 04, 2005
    aww thanks livvy!!
    -snugs-
    i know it's not long and only a one shot but thanks all the same...
    -grins-
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  • From ANON - Liv on November 04, 2005
    Well done Gin! Really good for a first fan fic. Sehr gut!
    -grins-
    xxx
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