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Reviews for Blackbird

By : LinW
  • From ANON - Lord Localfreak on November 16, 2005
    *grins* wonderfully written and I do love a good 'hidden identity' fic that doesn't always end up turning cliche. Wonderfully refreshing and an excellent, sensitive, and brilliant fic.
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  • From ANON - atroppa haven on November 09, 2005
    yummy.
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  • From ANON - Lady Allylandra on November 08, 2005
    This story was absolutly fantastic. I loved every part of it and would love you to write a sequel. Though a little depressing i love the way the charcters interacted and i honestly think that most of what you said about Dumbledore, Fudge and ron is correct. And thanks for remembering the torture in the 5th book. A lot of people glance over that one but you didn't. Cheers for a great read
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  • From ANON - Chloe the Grey on November 08, 2005
    I liked it. I usually dislike Dumbledore/Ron/Hermione/Gryffindor bashing, but you wrote it in such a way that I was able to move past it to get to the rest of the story (if that makes sense). I thought that your characters, while ooc with canon, all stayed in character in the world you created in your story. I'm glad that you didn't have Harry taken in by the Slytherins when he was rejected by Gryffindor. I find it much more believable that Hagrid would have taken him in. There were a few parts that I cringed at, but good job over all! :)
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  • From ANON - JJ on November 08, 2005
    I stand in awe of your story telling ability.
    Please write more!
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  • From ANON - Noir Black on November 08, 2005
    I don't usually care for fics where Harry changes his name . . . but you made it very believable and waited until the end to call him by his new identity for good. I had wanted to read about Harry and Snape not 'Who ever' and Snape.

    Also the 'almost' rape scenes were at least tasteful.

    I can say that I found it sweet and very believable. It was an enjoyable read. I'm very glad I took the time to read it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2005
    Now then.. finished..! Whew.

    I liked the aspect of multiple personality d/o. Very nicely done! And you didn't give him like.. forty two different personalities, made him aware of both, and gave him control. Quite good!

    And the turn around! Kingsley.. what a snake! You've got a wonderful set of heros navigating a rather political world in ways I can only applaud. I do certainly look forward to more from you! :)


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  • From ANON - Memme on November 07, 2005
    I was at first uncertain about the use of Ron as a "bad guy" but you've certainly pulled it off with aplomb! Well done! And glad to see the git is going to finally get what he deserves. :)
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  • From ANON - Memme on November 07, 2005
    Sure love the quotes.. they're very fitting! Nicely done!!!! *L* I'd love to see your hoard.

    Hmm... and Sev is on the verge of needing to have a serious talk and some real new types of thinking... silly man.

    But bravo against Zach! What a doof! Yay Harry!!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Memme on November 07, 2005
    5: Okay... okay... I keep thinking I'll wait until the end, but then something happens and I want to cheer.

    Egypt? Eek! Very interesting chapter and a nice movement along the story. This is grand!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2005
    Pt. 3: Yay for Severus! We need hero music. Dah tata Daaaaahhh! *g*
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  • From ANON - Ari on November 07, 2005
    I liked it. Not too overtly sexual, but had a good story as well.
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  • From ANON - Moi on November 07, 2005
    And I see you have a marriage propopsal from ExecutiveHPfan. Congratulations!
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  • From ANON - Moi on November 07, 2005
    One more reader to tell you how dramatic, how riveting, how fabulous. All true, well-deserved accolades. My critique: Very few grammatical or usage errors, and the plot was well-paced and uniquely adorned -- abused Harry (seeming staple of fan-fic) earns his living in modeling (I haven't read that one before). Despite his OOC (thinking strictly of canon), Severus was still believable, especially his patient, calculated responses, his love demonstrated so far beyond mere sex--an excellent symptom of a thinking, intelligent, and self-disciplined man. The use of Ron as an enemy was brutal but fascinating; we've all read so many Draco-hates-Harry stories, it's a change of pace to hate Ron instead. Other side characters, both JKR's and yours, were well-done. It takes a lot to make me hate Kingsley and feel something other than disdain for Percy. Top marks, LinW. I hope you publish more.
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  • From ANON - sans on November 07, 2005
    I truly enjoyed reading this story. If you have more, I loook forward to reading all of them. Thank you.
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