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Reviews for Alliances

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  • From ANON - Alison on January 21, 2006
    Great chapter!! Please update again soon. =o)
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  • From ANON - Amessis on January 21, 2006
    So glad to see more of this!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 21, 2006
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 5! Thank goodness for Hermione or Harry might have messed this up. Oh I hope this is a good thing!
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  • From WynterRose on January 21, 2006
    You wrote bun-buns!! hehehehe i love it!

    I can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - scully on January 20, 2006
    OK, I know I've read all this before, some time ago. I think it was on this site, but maybe not. But I know I only read the 3 chapters you currently have posted. I liked the story then and I still like it a lot. So is this a re-post? Have you decided to finish it?
    It has a lot of great potential, with the Alliance and a potential biological war. And, of course, the H&D action!
    The story is well written for the most part, but you have spelling, grammar and syntax problems that detract from it and could easily be sorted out for you by a beta. I don't know if you have a beta or not, but I'd be willing to beta this story for you. Feel free to email me if you'd like to talk about me beta-ing for you. Iamscullysmile@yahoo.com.
    Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - *Dark!Vultrix* on January 20, 2006
    "I may not have a large wing span to impress you with, but I do have this"-- HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! oh that shnitt was funny!! omg!! Please write more soon!!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 20, 2006
    Need chapter 4!!! If Draco hurts Harry I will help torture and kill him!
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  • From ANON - *Dark!Vultrix* on January 20, 2006
    OMG!!! I love this!!! Ihat last line in chap 2 was awesome... ahahahahahahaha!!! I can't wait to read harry's reaction!! please write more soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Amessis on January 20, 2006
    Yeah! More.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on January 19, 2006
    I just love this story!
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  • From ANON - cyn on January 19, 2006
    ooooo i like the last bargaining chip...oh yes i do. i am thinking we need some more! yep...
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 19, 2006
    What happened to chapter 3? I was waiting for 4 but instead only 1 and 2 were here. No matter. I can't wait for chapter 3!
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  • From ANON - avihenda on November 16, 2005
    is draco planning something? grr poor harry. Hope harry's father is wrong.

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  • From ANON - scully on November 15, 2005
    i like this story and dont want to see it taken down, so please put up a disclaimer!!!! otherwise this story might go bye bye and i would be sad!
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  • From ANON - Filia on November 12, 2005
    In love. So in love with this!

    I'd love to talk to you.

    aim: girlwholived
    y!m: chibifiliaulcopt
    msn: lipstickboys@hotmail.com
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