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By : Darknessmaster
  • From Chandrima on February 10, 2007
    Oh, come on! Please post more? I want to read more! Please?!
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  • From ANON - shinna on November 24, 2006
    Very very good story. I'm so ready for more. Please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - deebomb on November 16, 2006
    it's a shame you never finished this, it's hilarious.
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  • From ANON - jw on January 17, 2006
    cant wait to see what next
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  • From ANON - Amessis on January 16, 2006
    Oooh, I liked! Can't wait for what's next.
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  • From ANON - squee on January 16, 2006
    well its probably snape that came but it could be someone looking for Harry...
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  • From ANON - Margo on January 16, 2006
    Darn you and your cliffys
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  • From WynterRose on January 16, 2006
    oooo i love it. caught in the act...and starting without snape! how could they? He definately needs to punish both of them
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  • From ANON - Alison on January 16, 2006
    Hmm... Snape and the visitor walked in on them? =o) Update soon please!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - EvilPlotBunnyAKABella on January 16, 2006
    luv it u should wright more
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  • From ANON - ... on January 16, 2006
    that was great.. not to mention funny
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 16, 2006
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 7! Can't wait to see who the person is. I'm thinking Severus. What happens next?
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  • From ANON - Uncertainties on January 16, 2006
    Very interesting, Constructive criticism--> I suggest that you go over your chapters before posting them, look for grammer and spelling mistakes, also be careful while writing don't make the story too quick paced or make it seem that you eagerly want to get to one part to the other. These factors can make the story slightly confusing or make the readers loose interest fast, i suggest that you expand on the details, explain how sexy harry looks, or how Draco's house was decorated, durring your sex scene you had the potential of making it quite hot with more detail to Harry and Draco's hot bodies.

    Anyway keep up the good work and i can't wait for more updates.
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  • From ANON - jw on January 14, 2006
    great update i always say end with a laugh
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  • From ANON - Margo on January 14, 2006
    Crazy chapter and oh no not a c;iffy
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