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By : windnstorm
  • From ANON - HavocTellenoi on January 02, 2006
    very nicely done. anymore intereting pairings hiding in your head that you'd like to share with the rest of us?

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  • From ANON - Vicky on November 27, 2005
    Your story is very nice. I would be very happy if there will be a continuation of the story. HOT.
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  • From ANON - mister_slash on November 11, 2005
    it was super hot. a few paragraphs would of been nice though.
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  • From ANON - CherryCoke on November 07, 2005
    That was some hot stuff right there! I'd love to see a another chapter as its an unusual pairing and quite good too! The only critisism I have is that you should make shorter paragraph's so its easier to read then. I hope I see the 2nd chapter soon! Again, great job! =)
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  • From ANON - nikki on November 06, 2005
    your storys awesome, i really hope you add another chapter, there really arnt enough cedric/draco stories.
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  • From ANON - Stormy on November 06, 2005
    Well When I typed it, it had paragraphs.
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  • From ANON - Katie K on November 06, 2005
    By the way, if you are unsure of where to start new paragraphs, here's a hint to start you off: every new person speaking in a conversation is a new paragraph, or at least a new line.

    Eg. "Hi!" John said, waving to Pamela.
    "Hi," she replied. "How are you?"
    "I'm fine thanks, and yourself?"
    "I'm good, thank you."

    ..blah blah blah. Anyways. Hope this helped :-P
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  • From ANON - Katie K on November 06, 2005
    PARAGRAPHS PLEASE!!! It is terribly confusing without them! But other than that, a good story :-P
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