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Reviews for McGonagall gets tired with Harry...

By : MademoiselleU
  • From DanielDentis on October 05, 2007
    Roach "magic stick" and a wand are basically the same thing!
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  • From ANON - Roach on July 12, 2006
    Magic stick? Did Professor McGonagall call a wand a magic stick? What in the world?! You're grammar is horrid, and the characters hardly make any sense at all. Sorry, but this wasn't very good. I believe you desperately need a beta-reader.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2006
    idea was original but totally OCC, the situation is revisable though.

    Do you actually READ harry potter, neither of them is rly like that.

    Your language was also quite poor, you might want to get a beta
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2005
    your spelling sucks
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  • From MademoiselleU on November 12, 2005
    Well, it's great, if you liked it anyway :) It's not a deadly serious story at all. That story would be actually a parody yet beacause my poor English :)
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  • From ANON - Heidi.... on November 11, 2005
    I don't know whether to laugh... or what. Lol. but i'll laugh. That was amusing, even if it wasn't supposed to be. I liked it though;) ahahhahaha.
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  • From ANON - amanda on November 06, 2005
    update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2005
    One thing is clear. You need a beta reader. So do I, so that's not so bad. :-)
    Your story has the potential to be great smut, but the bad grammar and spelling get in the way of the readers' enjoyment.
    By the way, it's McGonagall. ;-)
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