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Reviews for Selfish Bastard

By : Looneyluna
  • From Persy on February 03, 2022

    It was hot and nasty, loved both povs but I felt sad at the ending of it. Great job!


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  • From Persy on June 21, 2021

    This def needs to be expounded upon, say from Hermiones' POV. Let Hermione tell Sev she is leaving, lets' see what happens!


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  • From noeby on August 18, 2008
    love this. It's intriguing and hot.
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on December 05, 2007
    Wow there is good and then there is f*cking amazing. Dude you are so amazing this is blowing my mind. The difference in views and the emotions mixed with the phycalities of it are freaking amazing to read. I adore this and it is going in my book.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 03, 2007
    Chapter 1: This is excellent! The set up is perfect for letting us see their differing attitudes and similarities of desire. I liked the way the two sides sides of the story dovetailed and gave insight to their emotions and feelings for one another.

    Hermione on the one hand is open and loving and could easily find a permanent place for her dark wizard in her heart and life. Snape on the other hand is apparently so wounded by life and his own opinion of his romantic inadequacies that at this point it would be almost impossible for Hermione to overcome his reluctance to go any further with their physical relationship.

    We see them both enjoying each other but there isn't any true mental connection on any other plane than the sexual that comes across. That is probably because of Snape's refusal to venture farther with anything that smacks of love. But so far Hermione seems content to have Snape only sexually and hasn't pushed much for anything more serious. Perhaps the two of them are happy that way.

    Wonderful writing and skillful handling of this sterile 'affair'.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Annie on December 02, 2006
    Hey Looney, Its WannaBArtist. I didnt know you were on AFF.N as well. Thanks or the link! this was great. I love reading your work so email me anytime with anything you want me to read. Bookworm_with_outta_life@yahoo.com is my email so send me one! now ima go through your storys on here.

    Annie
    WannaBArtist
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 11, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - 0HSNAPtheresa on June 28, 2006
    love it. :] you`re an amazing author.
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  • From ANON - marajade179 on November 07, 2005
    This story seriously needs another chapter. I would love to see how they work out. Exellent job!!!
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  • From ANON - footyfan on November 07, 2005
    wow!!! I can't think of anything else to say! That was great! I love your work, and that was a wnderful insight to SS/HG! Thankyou!
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  • From ANON - Maria on November 07, 2005
    But, but, but......Would he really let her go, if she left? I don't think Snape would EVER admit to being afraid of anything, but surely he wants what he has with her to continue? BTW, this is really well written and the smut is fantastic.
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