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Reviews for A Dragon and His Kitten

By : SweetAsHoney

From ANON - way2hott4u on October 06, 2006
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From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
i dont get it...
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From ANON - whogirl on November 29, 2005
You said you were going to update this fic with a really long chapter "next week" and that was TWO weeks ago. I'm getting impacient and your fic is already on the fourth page. Come on!!!
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From ANON - pixi on November 16, 2005
interesting. Pretty good really. Do be careful with the your/you're mix-ups remember your = possissive, you're = you are
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From ANON - Mitalanea on November 14, 2005
This sounds really promising....Looking forward to reading what is next so please continue!!!

~Mit
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From ANON - Chels on November 12, 2005
Hey Manda, like I said before, I will help you with the story as much as you want me too. Hehe, aristocratic british lilt. Well, I'll actually see you later today... loves ya!
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From ANON - The Doominator on November 12, 2005
Uhh... it's ok!
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From ANON - Tygerlily on November 11, 2005
My complaint is same as always - just too damn short, lol. I did notice a few errors along the way but nothing too serious. You might consider getting a beta reader or at least someone you can brainstorm with. That way it's another set of eyes going through your chapters before posting. Oh, and a note on the mac and cheese line: In my opinion, I just can't see Draco saying mac but more Macaroni. He is Lucius Malfoy's son now. ^_^

Anyway, though ridiculously short, it was still a pleasure to read and I can't wait to see what you have happen next!
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From ANON - Experience My Dreams on November 11, 2005
I love it!!! Oh my Goodness I like I have yet to read anything like!!!
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From ANON - firewall on November 11, 2005
LOL Yup I think you had better finish this chapter latter...you left a lot of us hanging wondering how the heck Fred Weasley felt comfortable just walking in.
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From ANON - Stag on November 11, 2005
Teehee, Dragons and Kittens...Makes one feel gooey inside...
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From ANON - SlytherinPrincess on November 11, 2005
NOOOOO!!!! U can't do this!!!!! U must continue writing this. It sounds very interesting and Draco sounds sooooo sexy!!! I need 2 read da rest of it!
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From ANON - Donavon. on November 11, 2005
You have the makings of a really good fanfic. But the short
chapters make it disjointed. However, best of luck with the play.
Best wishes.
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From ANON - Pippa on November 10, 2005
Good attempt at a first story. It is overly dramatic with not enough plot for me. I think what is going on - I've done this myself - is that you read your story to yourself knowing all the richness and creativity that you mean to bring to the story. You don't see the lack of fullness to the story because to you, your imagination automatically fills in the gaps because you know the story so well. When you come back to this story in say, five years, you will know what I mean. Good job, countinue writing and I can see a lovely writer in the making. :-)
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From ANON - Alex.. on November 10, 2005
TOO SLOW>> MOOVEEE ..
please give me a LONG chapter..
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