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Reviews for A Dragon and His Kitten

By : SweetAsHoney
  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2005
    I know that it has been said before, but you have got to make the chapters longer! I am really interested in the storyline, but collectively, though you have four chapters, it is not very much to go with. If you keep posting these one paragraph sort of chapters, your story will be like 60 pages long, and that is just annoying to have to keep uploading new pages like that.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 09, 2005
    good job!
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily on November 09, 2005
    Yay for update! Boo, that its so short! Although, I understand the whole play thing, I used to do about four throughout the school year and I know how even one alone can eat up a schedule. So I suppose I can forgive you, lol. Even though short, I'm loving the intereaction between Draco and Hermione. I know some would argue that Hermione is a strong character [and she is!] but it's nice to see her having to take comfort someone and well since Draco's the one willing to give it just makes it even better ^_^

    I happily await more!


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  • From ANON - Hope on November 09, 2005
    I really like this story adn it is progressing nicely if a little slowly, and it seems like you got the start of a good plot in your hands. Please continue
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily on November 09, 2005
    Squee, that was such a pleasure to read [though you're killing me with the short chapters here, lol] Anyway, I loved it and the last line just really hooked me. He won't let her escape again! I love Draco possessive affection, I really think that's how he'd naturally be with someone, just because of how he was raised. I see truly loving Hermione but in what many would consider an unconventional way. Whoo, I know this is going to be one interesting read.

    I cannot wait to see what you have happen next!
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  • From ANON - Chels on November 08, 2005
    Hey Manda, you know who I am, and I know where you live. Well babe, good story, even though I read it before it came to live here. Lemme know if you want help with anything. I'm thinking of putting a story on here too. I say, like everyone else, that the chapters should be a little longer. And you know I'm expecting some steamy love in here *wink*. Otherwise the story already rocks! Keep it comin!

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  • From ANON - ami on November 08, 2005
    good so far. put another chapter up soon!!!!!!!!! puhhhhhhhhhhleeeeze *makes cute puppy dog eyes and sticks out bottom lip*
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 08, 2005
    Is that going to be Hermione's true appearance? blond hair, blue eyes. What does he mean, he won't screw up? so hermione has being with him before? Good story, keep updating, can't wait for chapter 4.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2005
    It's a good start of a story, the chapters could/should be longer though... The chapters are so short that you barely have any time to get in to the story, before they are over. It could very well be a really good story, just have longer chapters...
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily on November 08, 2005
    This story looks like its going to be really good and I've enjoyed what I've read so far. I'm really interested to see what happens next. The only thing is, the chapters are really on the short side. I mean the first and second chapter combined are only a couple of paragraphs if that. I wouldn't mind a bit of a wait for longer more detailed chapters ^_^
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  • From ANON - Alex on November 08, 2005
    What did u do to her?!
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  • From ANON - Jess on November 08, 2005
    Chapters are a little short, you might wanna change that, other than that it's interesting
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  • From ANON - 2bfoundwanting on November 08, 2005
    I think this has SO much potential, i really like your writting style and the build up for the plot. But the chapters are too short!! Cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - whogirl on November 07, 2005
    LONGER CHAPTERS!!! (pretty please?)
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