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Reviews for Pursuit

By : Nyxx
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 15, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Dragonero on November 01, 2006
    Interesting!!! I like the way snape plays with hermione!!! The plot is very good as well but I
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 31, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Nyxx on October 29, 2006
    Thank you! I'm glad- that you're glad- that I'm continuing the story! LoL The chapter additions would have been more regular had I retained my internet service, but I had no choice but to disconnect it for a bit. I doubt I'll have that problem again though, thankfully. Hmmm, now to address your questions, which I love to do btw =) There was no beast in the cave at all- it was only Severus and his use of magic to be cruel to Hermione. My only explanation is that he isn't too fond of her at the moment- but the only constant is change- so hold out with me! Perhaps he has control issues and wanted to express his dominance? It
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  • From ANON - lipa on October 29, 2006
    I am glad that you are continuing this story. I read the first three chapters months ago. The cave is a fine distinguishing detail, but I would prefer knowing more about strange fires and beasts in the dark. My overall impression after reading the whole (4 chapters) now is "uprootedness" so to speak. Like they all float (with a headache). If Hermione was grounded in the first chapter, and she seemed to be, she has lost it in the meantime. Her connection with Snape is unclear at best, unjustified at worst. How come she let him touch her at all, let alone lead her to reset her Occlumency? Who are the spies in the Order? Are the people in the cave just refugees or do they have a joint purpose? There is more secrecy and vagueness in the agreement between Snape and Hermione than is justified which breeds insecurity, and that cannot be good. You might reconsider the quantity of information given to the reader. Speaking for myself, I like to walk through the mistery, but floating through fog drains me pretty quickly.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 29, 2006
    wow that was great ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more .... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on October 28, 2006
    This story is bloody brilliant!!! You are a genious!!! I am completely enamored of your wonderous creation! Can't wait for the attraction to begin with these two! It will be sooo hot! Please say you can update soon?! Please! Can hardly wait for more! Happy writing, dearie! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Hugs,
    Killer K :D
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  • From ANON - Bella Snape on October 28, 2006
    This is a really promising story. I like it so far. I love the sort of Snape/Hermione story where they solve mysteries together. Is there going to be some smut in this, coz I like a bit of everything in a story.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 24, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 26, 2006
    I love the way Snape plays Hermione. Poor kid didn't stand a chance. The order seems much more organized and military under Potter. I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From Nyxx on January 26, 2006
    Okay, there's no way that I can see to respond to all of your wonderful reviews... So I'll just say it here... Thank you!!! The encouragement I receive from all of you here, and in every other archive in which I post, greatly motivates me to give you all my best. Your attention to details show me flaws I need to focus on, and strong points I can work with in the story so far... and I can't thank you all enough! This fanfic is just as much for you as it is for me, and I hope to give you something unique to enjoy. The plot has certainly been done before (search for horcruxes and such)- but I have a few twists, which I think are canon, that I hope to surprise you with... if I can pull it off. Don't think that seeing the theory list will give any tips either... because I left out the specifics! ;) hehehe!
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  • From ANON - Lynda on January 26, 2006
    What a great story! It sure starts off in a very unique (have not read anything quite like it) and dramatic way. I also think Amilia Bones is not really dead, and it is quite possible that Albus has "guided" events for a final purpose. It sure seems hard to believe that so many of the events that happend over the years could have done so without Albus knowing something about what was going on...Well done. I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - sevsmione on January 25, 2006
    Interesting points of view,I would love to learn the quotes you mentioned,please update quickly.
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  • From ANON - Alauralen on January 25, 2006
    OMG!! That was great!! Very well written. I personally agree with you on the points of Dumbledore's manipulations. I thought that it was quite obvious myself, but other people don't always think so. Very good fic, can't wait for more!! Gotta love Snape!! Keep up the great work and please update soon!!

    Alauralen
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  • From ANON - MND on January 25, 2006
    vERY GOOD START, i THINK THIS STORY HAS A LOT OF POTENCIAL.... keep writting, You have oficially a new fan
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