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Reviews for Pursuit

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  • From ANON - Laura on January 25, 2006
    Wonderful, well written and I can't wait to read more. Very well done.

    Laura
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  • From ANON - Statues on January 25, 2006
    Nice chapter, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Ginger on January 25, 2006
    Well, I think this story is great and thank you for your update!!! What I don
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  • From slygriff21 on January 25, 2006
    What's he going to show her? I can't wait to read more. Please update again and soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Ginger on January 06, 2006
    Very good story!!! I like it that there is a plot other than the love story between snape and hermione!!! The only thing i did not like is the way dumbledore is characterised in you story, but I understand it is an important part of your plot. I hope that you will continue that story and that they all will work together and be able to kill voldemort and that the relationship between snape and hermione will always stay interesting. It will be very funny to see them bigger about who has the upper hand in the upcoming relationship!!! They have just the characters for it!!!
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  • From ANON - jamie on January 05, 2006
    great start. please tell me that you intend to finish.
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  • From ANON - Tabitha on January 01, 2006
    This is interesting...definetly the part about not obliviating Severus...I waited for this update...you had such an interesting opening...

    Keep it up....
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  • From ANON - lemonade on December 26, 2005
    I am intrigued by your story so far. I truly truly wish Jo had not had Snape betray Albus like he did, but I can only conclude that he did it in self-preservation. I like when people twist the last book to redeem Snape. There are many creative ways, and having Albus tell him to end him is a good one. It's the thing I thought of and hoped for when I read that part. Please continue, I'd love to see what you do with this.
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  • From ANON - Erin on November 22, 2005
    I am curious as to where you are going to take this. I liked that you went back to her mother and that she knew that something had happened to Hermione because of it.
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  • From Ms_Figg on November 15, 2005
    Now, you KNOW you have to continue this immediately, right? Good writing. I'm hooked.
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  • From ANON - Alice on November 15, 2005
    Wow! This is a very interesting start! Looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - nedgo101 on November 15, 2005
    Great story so far: I love the post-HBP plot lines. I loved the "drop the charm, not that you had much to start with," line. I'll keep looking for updates.
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  • From ANON - Niclaire on November 10, 2005
    Really great story. In the flood of stories written after HBP, I think that this is one of the most original I read. I'll be waiting for the next chapters.
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  • From slygriff21 on November 09, 2005
    Interesting start. Update soon. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Laura on November 08, 2005
    Wow! That was an excellent beginning, I know I'm looking forward to more- soon! Good writing.
    L
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