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Reviews for Papercut

By : Jigsaw
  • From ANON - Silver on June 30, 2006
    Great story. Really. But...um...update would be even better :-)
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  • From ANON - Erika on June 17, 2006
    Damn you need to update.
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  • From ANON - ocealot on January 31, 2006
    Ooh, I really do like this, pleeeeeaaaaase keep on writing, you just can
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  • From ANON - Aeko on January 29, 2006
    the story's pretty good, nive capturing Sirus' point of veiw but the thing about te dog, dog fur doesn't grow like humans does. if you dye a humans hair eventually their natural hair color will show at the roots, if you dye an animals fur, dog in this case. well Animals shed and their fur is replaced by new strands, so rather than a few weeks of white, Sirius would have a white coat until the next season, when he starts to shed and his fur would then be flecked black until he was fully black again.
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  • From ANON - super marshmellow trooper du duper on January 11, 2006
    I can beta if ya like.

    And great job! It's really cute so far.
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  • From BlackPriestess on January 05, 2006
    This is going to be very interesting. I check your story every day, please update! More hot Severus wanking action XD
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  • From ANON - Newtype on January 04, 2006
    I almost did not see you had updatted, I think it was a bit to soon for Dumbedor to show up but you managed it quite nicly. Could you please write more?
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  • From ANON - Daisy Mae on December 29, 2005
    Give it up while you're ahead. You truly need a beta.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on December 24, 2005
    Beautiful. Simply beautiful. The thought of Sirius and Severus together seems so...right. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Lovely writing
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  • From ANON - maeda on December 21, 2005
    I would just like to say that you have a fine story going on here and I do hope your not offended or anything but the story is quite difficult to read and there are a few spelling error
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  • From ANON - Sara on December 21, 2005
    Hi!!!

    I just read your story and I must say I like it a lot!
    Very interesting... So... update? Please?
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  • From ANON - Anna Lynx on December 16, 2005
    Wow ! I like this story. How long will they stay that way ? Sirius is not treated that bad, he ?
    Chapter 3 ? Please !
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  • From Enkanowen on December 15, 2005
    you asked me to clarify: your story does not have any paragraphs. You should have a line between each paragraph and every time a new person speaks. I am not sure if you can use the html codes on this site but it simply is < p > without the spaces which creates a paragraph. It is very hard to read something without paragraphs because you can easily lose your place and everything seems very unstructured.
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  • From ANON - viu on December 15, 2005
    Perhaps, Dumbledore would bleach Sirius's fur then he didn't need to use bleach again. hehe
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  • From ANON - Newtype on December 15, 2005
    Interesting consept and stroy line, would you please continue it? I would very much like to read more.
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