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Reviews for The quartet meet Lily and the Marauders

By : jaymclg
  • From ANON - Raisden_Captivity on August 19, 2006
    Hey... this story has a really good plot. However, it might be a good idea if you got a beta reader, or just anyone you know who's really good with grammar to go back and edit your chapters for you. Also, Lily isn't in the same house as James. She's a Ravenclaw, so for her to be in the Gryffindor common room is a little strange. I'm not typing all of this to insult you. I think that your idea is very unique. This story has great potential. It's just a little hard to read because of the errors. But thanks for writing this!

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  • From mynoan on July 31, 2006
    please please please update. I can't wait to read the rest. so awesome. it rocks.
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  • From ANON - colonol havoc on July 21, 2006
    ok let me start off by saying AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok im better now. truthfully ive never thought of the Sirius/Ron pairing b4 nd now that i have i don lik it but they way u wrote it......I LIK IT!!!!!!! i just need a little bit more detail lik the finished scenes from the memories. i know why u didnt put them in i mean ewwww! but still im a smut fan! nd i dun no i always felt they would go for the older men call it intuition. but yeh lik i was saying just give me some steamy sex scenes next nd ill b good to go. weirdly enough the murarders(sp? srry im tired) sound lik me nd my friends minus peter. im sirius 100%!!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyway keep writing uve got talent!!!!!
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  • From mynoan on July 12, 2006
    Done with what's there, Please please please please please update. It is a smashing story and it has only just begun. I can't wait to read the rest. Please Please update.
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  • From mynoan on July 11, 2006
    What i've been reading so far is so very very good. If you're not done please finish it. Please Please Please.
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  • From ANON - Orlando on January 22, 2006
    cool, post more
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2006
    gogogo, its a great story, i hope you'll be able to update soon...
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  • From GriffinLillani12 on January 13, 2006
    Oh my gosh! You have no idea how long I was looking for this story! I loved it when i first read it, and I forgot to put it on my favorite's list. So I searched for about a month to find it again! I love this story, and the concept of it! I think you made great pairings, and I hope you continue writing!
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  • From ANON - Lady Granger-Snape on January 05, 2006
    Hey! I love this story, but what happened? I remember reading it a while ago, and it was finished! Did it get deleted or something? anywho, keep updating!!!

    Lady Granger-Snape
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  • From ANON - dude on January 01, 2006
    dude not to be mean but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update lol, i absolutly luv ur story and i need to hear more of it *sniff sniff* update soon ?
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  • From ANON - DregonIceWing35 on January 01, 2006
    Hello
    I am a loyal fan of this story and was wondering when it would in fact have another chapter Will you pleeeeeeeease update soon. I wanna know what James and Lilly are going to do once they get out of the pensive to Harry
    Thanks,
    DregonIceWing35
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  • From ANON - sincity82 on December 19, 2005
    very good chapter, like how these chapters are going and really looking forward to whats next.
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  • From ANON - angel on December 17, 2005
    wow that was great please please please please please more ... please update soon i would love to read more .. keep up the awesome awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Euston on December 16, 2005
    Please Please finish this story!
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  • From ANON - dregonicewing35 on December 14, 2005
    Please hurry and add another chapte I can't wait for the Marauder to see years 4-6.
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