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Reviews for The quartet meet Lily and the Marauders

By : jaymclg
  • From ANON - GinnyRiddle on June 27, 2015
    I so wanted to like this, it had a lot of great spots and ideas. But damn! The grammar was so bad I struggled through it, very distracting! Tow instead of toe. Save instead of safe and to night instead of tonight. Every single time! This story really needed a proof reader. The last thing that made it impossible for me to get through the story was that it seems to be written by someone who has only ever seen the movies. So many facts were written incorrectly. The Snape's weren't a respectable family. His father was a muggle which meant his mother was disowned by the Prince family. The Lestrange brothers were Rodolphus and Rabastan, not Rupert. Bellatrix and Narcissa Black were not twins. And the Potions Professor during the seventies was Horace Slughorn, who Snape replaced. There were a lot of things like that which someone who only watched the movies might not know, since a lot of it wasn't mentioned in the movies. While this is not really a bad thing it did make it irritating for me to read and I couldn't keep going.
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  • From ANON - chelly on November 06, 2014
    Please update I want to see what happens now that they are back home. This is a really good story.
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  • From ANON - Katie Bowen on August 12, 2012
    OH MY GOD, PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER REALLY SOON!
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  • From ANON - Theresa on April 21, 2009
    I have to say that this story is amazing I love the theme and though it is now AU I will continue to follow it if that is you continue it I know I'd really like to see the ending. The return and all that.
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  • From RemusLupinFanGirl on September 01, 2008
    I loved this story. Its unfair that I am unable to create such wonderful stories. I'm 20 years old and even I enjoyed your story.
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  • From ANON - VB on June 16, 2008
    Awww where's the next part
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  • From Mist on May 02, 2007
    ...are these fics just about breeding? It seems like most of whats happening is men and women having kids. Lots of kids. Congrats on keeping all the names straight, man.
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  • From HPFAN88 on March 15, 2007
    this story is a really good one but at the end of chapter 25 you put it down that Nyah and Laney's children would be harry's cousins' when they would actually be his aunts'/uncles' because they are his parents brothers' or sisters'. and in the third chapter you put that professor sibble had a vision when she was only speaking of the prophacy.
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  • From ANON - Katrina on January 13, 2007
    WICKED!!!!! I'm sooo happy that you updated! I hope that you finish this story soon. I really did enjoy the tale. You are a great writer, and I'm glad that you've written such a fic.

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - sincity82 on January 10, 2007
    can't believe it's over. i really liked the story and looking forward to the sequal.
    hope you post the sequal soon.
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  • From ANON - Galion on January 09, 2007
    Thank you for the update :)
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  • From ANON - angel on January 09, 2007
    awwwwwwwww that was soooooooo sweet i love it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - mikochan on January 08, 2007
    If James and Lily have siblings, they would be uncles or aunts of Harry.

    Your fic is superbe. Hope you update soon. Keep on like this.

    mikochan.
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  • From ANON - Shadow on January 07, 2007
    hey i love the new chapters!!!! MORE SOON please! and more sex!!! lol
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  • From ANON - angel on January 07, 2007
    wow that was awsome and i love the balls... and in glad the stoped snape from going to the tree.. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel

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