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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Stained Glass Angel

By : laceyparo
  • From ANON - sbkar on January 11, 2006
    You've got a glaring continuity problem: Draco broke his leg; there was no use of skele-grow potion nor introduction of Madame Pomfrey to fix it; and, a broken leg hurts like hell. You seem to ignore that plot device.

    Why don't you submit your story, the chapters written so far, to a beta? They can be found at http://groups.yahoo.com/adultconf?dest=%2Fgroup%2FAdultFanFictionBetaReaders%2F
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 22, 2005
    In a church? Kinky! This was all planned? Can't wait for chapter 4!
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  • From ANON - cyn on December 21, 2005
    I promise I am going to be gentle! First and foremost I love the scenario for your story. It has a great plot and can be done so well.

    for my nit-picking, I promise to be nice because I would want someone to tell me (and nicely). Personally I think you rushed the sex. I was confused through most of the chapters in trying to figure out what was going on. Adding more detail would help.

    Feel free to email me if you want, I promise I don't bite, I just want to help because I see so much potential in this story. Or just ignore me and chalk me up to a raving lunatic.

    *Goes to hide behind her famous rock*
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  • From ANON - Amessis on December 21, 2005
    ooh, I liked! Can't wait for the rest.
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  • From ANON - Holy Bell on November 29, 2005
    THIS IS NOT A REVIEW. Thank you for your reviews. I will take your advice and check my work beforehand. In the next chap. the two hook up and everything is explained. Thanks for being so understanding of my computer's malogustment.
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  • From ANON - LadyX on November 24, 2005
    thanks for that little summery at the bottom of the chapter. I was a bit confuzzled. This is gonna be a good fic me thinks. Cant wait for more.
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  • From Flamesky on November 23, 2005
    Oh my gosh lol!!! I loved:"
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 22, 2005
    That went well. Harry wants to be inside him? He kissed him? O-kay. So what happens in chapter 3?
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  • From ANON - Amessis on November 22, 2005
    Well done- here's hoping they get away.
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  • From ANON - alix on November 22, 2005
    Is this an Alternate reality story? because in the HP books Harry's relatives would never set foot close to the school Not to mention that if they are all muggles they wouldn't even be able to see the school due to the magic that hides it from non witch/wizard/magic folks. And what is this Draco tripping like some simpering girl in the second chapter? That only happens in the movies where the girl is so graceful until it is time to run away that then she trips and hurts herself. Also if they were in a secret passage how did Harry's aunt find him? This sounds like an interesting story but it doesn't flow very well and has some plot holes. Keep writing though I do look forward to reading more and maybe it will explain the things I was asking about.
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  • From ANON - manx on November 22, 2005
    The story was going well until they heard Harry's Aunt's voice. There is no way she could have found them with them having the map and using secret passages. Try to be SLIGHTLY more realistic.
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  • From ANON - Dezra on November 15, 2005
    I really enjoy the opening chapter, I would like to see how you build on it with Draco and Harry's relationship.
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  • From ANON - Holy Bell on November 14, 2005
    THIS IS NOT A REVIEW. JUST A NOTICE. Sorry about all the problems my computer is having, but I will be lucky to get half my stuff typed by the end of the day. But I shall not give up! I will get this stupid peice of junk to work yet!


    Thank you for your attention for this breife spaz(?) out. Have a nice AFF day.
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  • From ANON - Sezza on November 11, 2005
    This sounds like an interesting story so far. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - elecktra on November 10, 2005
    I love it! Poor Harry! Please update soon1
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