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By : kyoslover
  • From on May 23, 2008
    great story is there going to be more.
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  • From ANON - ClarenceOddbody(notloggedon) on October 29, 2006
    Wonderful fic if I do say so myself. I enjoyed it very much so. That's so BAD ASS that you are into classic rock and you slipping in that awesome song by 38 special made it all the more exciting. I am obsessed with classic rock. Hmmmm...I'm going to have to do a songfic. lol. Rock on dude.
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  • From ANON - Kyoslover on January 18, 2006
    I do appreciate the feedback! I never have been much of a writer. I was hoping to sharpen up my "skills" writing fiction and getting reviews. So thanks! No offense taken.
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  • From ANON - Batmanda on January 06, 2006
    I couldnt really get into it. i dont k now what it was, but the first few paragraphs were... un interesting... i'm sorry. and it did seem to get a bit repetitive, always using their names. over and over in the same paragraph...
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  • From ANON - Tigris on January 05, 2006
    I couldn't finish reading your lemon. The run-ons and the continuous use of 'Harry' or 'Remus' or 'he' to start your sentences lost me completely. Change up your sentance starters and get rid of the Runons, and it would be so much better.
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  • From ANON - mrsmoonypadfoot on November 10, 2005
    Aww poor Harry and his insecurities. i like it! i like the way it ended to!
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