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Reviews for The Halloween Ball

By : rush22
  • From ANON - lemonade on November 14, 2005
    I'm enjoying. Waiting to see what they make of each other at the ball.
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  • From ANON - sleeper_girl on November 14, 2005
    I really like this fic, but I think that you should try to organise your writing more. Your plot is a bit hard to follow because of the frequent memories, and a few times you repeat yourself, once from Hermione's point of view and once from Snape's, but you say the same things and use the same images in the scenes. Try a little more present tense, and a little more plot work.
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  • From ANON - Experience My Dreams on November 14, 2005
    heh . . . Go get her Snape!!!
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on November 14, 2005
    Great chapter! Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Sheila on November 14, 2005
    Keep up the great work!!!! Your definately getting an A+ in my grade book.
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  • From slygriff21 on November 14, 2005
    Nice chapter. Can't wait to read more. I will be looking for your update!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on November 11, 2005
    I love this! I mean I really Love this. Its brilliant! and your first fic you say? Bravo! My first was nowhere near as good as this. You hhave a talent my dear. I'm a big fan of the pairing so I simply can't wait untill they get together.....well I hope they do! I hope to see an update soon! Keep up the good work. And hey come join this HP site I'm on. There are loads of SS/HG fans on there so plenty to talk about. :) http://thaelixir.proboards49.com
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  • From ANON - Experience My Dreams on November 11, 2005
    I love it!!! I can't wait till for the next chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - Emmie on November 11, 2005
    It is a good story, and I like where the plot is going. However, I was quite surprised to hear that you were and English major. Based on the errors (grammatical and spelling alike), I would not have considered this English major material. Do you have a beta, or do you at least proofread? I do like your story; I'm just hoping that next time you will have figured out where to use commas. Although, I must say that I am impressed with a bit of your vocabulary. Aquiline is such a good word, and it is rarely used in writting like this. It makes things more interesting. Do not fret, I shall continue to read your story if you decide to not fix any errors. It it is great story and I do enjoy. Have a nice day.

    Emmaline
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  • From ANON - SyXX on November 11, 2005
    This is great so far...Keep up the good work...
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on November 11, 2005
    Glad you didn't take my review for a flame - it wasn't meant as one. Well done on this chapter and I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on November 11, 2005
    I like your story and the way you develope the plot.
    I hope we will get a update soon.

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - Susan on November 11, 2005
    I like the first two chapters very much. You seem to have a slow build in the works, which is always nice to read. I think the flashback worked well in chapter one. The background you gave was just enough to show that this was not "brand-new sex on legs" Hermione attempting to shag her Potions Master. I also thought the inclusion of the differences in Muggle attire and Wizarding attire made sense(for her to be a bit nervous). Would be like going shopping in your bathing suit. LOL. I look forward to more chapters. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on November 11, 2005
    Wow, I think your first attempt is really very good! I have enjooyed your first two chapters and I am looking forward to reading the rest of your story. Great job!
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  • From slygriff21 on November 11, 2005
    Kick ass second chapter! I can't wait to read more! You've got to update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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