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Reviews for No one messes with her

By : namilie
  • From ANON - woah... on November 12, 2005
    wow............... 0.o
    1st of all you need to get that out of this catagory, because some of us, don't like reading slash
    2nd you should have someone beta it
    3rd that was very confusing
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  • From ANON - - on November 12, 2005
    ...hmmm...
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 12, 2005
    And it was in the wrong section, you should have had a warning too.
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 12, 2005
    That was pretty good, except it was kind of confusing at some parts.
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  • From ANON - Miari on November 12, 2005
    It was impossible to follow the apparently non-existant plotline. All I could make out was that it was (I THINK) a HG/LM, slashrape, OOC fic mistakenly placed in the HG/DM section. You would do well to find a beta well-versed in making story ideas comprehensible.
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  • From ANON - bitchindaattic on November 11, 2005
    i didnt like dat shitt
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2005
    Get this out of the D/Hr section!
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  • From ANON - RedBird on November 11, 2005
    This is very hard to follow. Qutoes would be good. Also this is posted in the wrong section.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2005
    generall when someone speaks you use quotation marks, such as 'hi' he said.

    you really need to get someone to check this over, and then maybe repost it
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  • From ANON - heidi on November 11, 2005
    it was good but i think you put it in the wrong section. but it was really good you should do another one just put it in the HG/LM section! :)
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  • From ANON - Latricia on November 11, 2005
    *staring with eyes wide and mouth hanging* OMIFUCKINGGAH. That was unbelivable! It wasn't bad but i have to get use to the idea of Draco getting raped by someone, and especially Harry nonetheless. I got to admit though, you keeping Hermione a secret as Lucius' mate was genius. I had a feeling at the beginning that she was his mate so i had to leave and come back to make sure this was in the right category. DAMN IT! I still can't get over the idea of Draco getting raped, Draco killing his mother, and Hermione fucking Lucius. I'm not going to leave a bad review, as i said before, because I have to get use to the idea. I also love how you made this story unique. I have never, ever heard of a story where Hermione led Draco to his death. I love Draco too much to let that happen, but since this is the first one i read like this....I LOVE IT!

    WRITE MORE...

    MUCH LOVE

    Latricia
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