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Reviews for Anger Managment

By : Syndallynn
  • From ANON - intcrimgrrl on November 15, 2005
    Interesting start, but I think reformatting to put spaces in between paragraphs would make it easier to read - it was like reading one huge long paragraph, which was a bit difficult.
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  • From ANON - Arden Rose on November 15, 2005
    that was quite a first chapter! I really enjoyed it thouroghly! I like the way he gets so angry, and yet the thought of her soft skin against his is looming in the back of his mind. Keep up the fantastic job!

    ~AR
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  • From ANON - john the heavy on November 15, 2005
    I like angry Draco i hope you continue cause i've never really seen Draco lose it like that and find it kind......refreshing! Go Draco!
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  • From ANON - cherie on November 15, 2005
    Well that was interesting. Can't wait to see what happens. So much anger, and I can sooo relate!!
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  • From ANON - sassyspicegurrl on November 15, 2005
    well, it sounds cool so far. nothing's really sappy, like hermione comes back to hogwarts all beautiful and everyone's drooling over her, and you haven't ruined draco's personality. some turds on this site just have him meet hermione and out of the blue he just says "i have feelings for you." HOW LAME IS THAT??!!! ultra-lame!! so i would keep up the angst and the fighting, but subtly having each character growing more attracted to the other and trying to deny it.
    but one more thing--lay off on the f-word. i don't curse, and while it's your story, if you're going to use it, save it only for when the characters are really mad. because it keeps it bad. if you use it too much it's just another word. see what i mean? keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - Juri on November 15, 2005
    Ooh, that was very good. Anger management is right! All that nice (sexual) tension between the two was very good to read. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 15, 2005
    That was really good! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - adriana on November 15, 2005
    i really like the story i cant wait to read more. ;)
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