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Reviews for A Painful Choice

By : Grittie
  • From ANON - silverdragonz_z on November 28, 2005
    keep up the good work. love the story.
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  • From ANON - KNW on November 28, 2005
    Definitely a well written piece and I'm looking forward to seeing more, you craft the tale well. On occasion you need to watch for stating more than is needed, or at least making it appear as if you are explaining rather than story telling. In recounting the evidence for Snape's allegiance to light it almost comes across as you making your case, rather than part of the story. A shorter example to give you an idea what I mean is also in chapter one: "He wasted no breath on responding to Riddle
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  • From ANON - Hambares on November 27, 2005
    I just found this story and wanted to say that I am enjoying it immensly. The tension between Harry and Severus is great. Although the tension between Harry and every character in the story is fun to read. My sympathies lie with Severus though. It has been SEverus who has figured things out and taken the initiative with Harry's problem. I hope things will work out for them, but I can't wait to continue reading! Nice going!
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  • From ANON - mysticsong on November 27, 2005
    Awww.. poor Severus. He tries so hard.

    I assume Harry could -feel- Ron being ready to wake up?

    I look foward to reading more from you.
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  • From ANON - Ditzy on November 27, 2005
    This is wonderful. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - SilverPhoenix on November 27, 2005
    this is great so far and im loving it :)...i really hope that you update soon...and that you get more review then 8(i think that was you anyways)...as for the story, it wasnt really what i was looking for, but i still loved it :) and im hoping to read another chapter soon ;)...i like how your writing the characters even if there a bit OOC (i usually dont like that) and i hope that Ron wakes up...well i must go now its 1:11am and im tired lol *hugs you* update soon :)
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  • From ANON - Jezebel Aurora on November 26, 2005
    Please continue with this story. I really like it and am curious where you will take it. I'm sure you will draw out Harry and Severus getting together, despite the fact that I can't wait for it to happen. I hope you at least give us plenty of Harry/Secerus interaction. I do love it when they banter back and forth.
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  • From ANON - Ari on November 26, 2005
    I liked it, i hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - N.S. on November 26, 2005
    i like this fic so far and i hope for frequent updates.

    ~N.S.
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  • From ANON - Kateri on November 26, 2005
    Very interesting story, I am really enjoying it and looking forward to more
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  • From ANON - ice owl on November 26, 2005
    that was interesting. I liked the discussion between Harry and Severus regarding sexuality. So, how did Harry know that Ron was going to wake up today?
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  • From ANON - jess on November 23, 2005
    sounds intresting

    i want to kill dumbledor :(

    what is up with snape and draco? why dodn't they let harry decide?
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on November 22, 2005
    great.... update again soon...
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  • From ANON - Neko Miu on November 22, 2005
    I really enjoyed your story; can't wait for the update! ^ - ^
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 21, 2005
    Great story, is it gonna be a DM/SS/HP story? I hope so, sounds great.
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