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Reviews for A Painful Choice

By : Grittie
  • From ANON - Annie on November 20, 2005
    I really like this chapter. I like how Harry explained why he shared the letter with Draco and why he changed his mind about talking to the blond. It's a really great chapter and I'd like to say its my favorite but honestly I like them all way to much to. So what's going on? Does Snape and Draco like Harry and are fighting over him or what? I can't wait to read the next chapter.

    I hope your muses are good to you.

    Happy Writings
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  • From ANON - ice owl on November 20, 2005
    Interesting. I can't figure where this is going...maybe a menage a trios? I do like all three of them together, all hot and gorgeous!
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  • From ANON - Annie on November 18, 2005
    Hey again. I really like this one. I really can't see where this story is going, and that's a very good thing. I see a lot of stories that have the same themes and it all goes basically the same but your's doesn't and I really like that. I also like the updating thing every day. Its really great although I'd understand if you didn't. It takes me forever to finish a chapter because I get writer's block a lot. LoL. I don't know how you're going to throw all this together and I really look forward to it.

    I hope your muses are good to you.

    Happy Writings
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  • From ANON - luci on November 18, 2005
    have just found your story...feel like I'm reading a preview of (what I hope is the storyline of) book 7. Keep it up, please - really want to read more.
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  • From ANON - Annie on November 17, 2005
    This was very well written and I really like how Harry knows that if someone stronger were to come along Draco wouldn't hesitate to turn on him. I'm really glad you added more paragraphs and that you weren't offended. I like Harry's slightly confusing slightly weary attitude, I think I said that before LoL. I really want to see Draco's reaction to the letter and what he thinks. I also want to see what Dumbledore says to Harry, if he ever visits him. Who's Harry going to end up with anyways? Or is it going to be several people? I like your description of Draco's study. And I can't think of anything else to say. LoL

    I hope your muses are good to you.

    Happy Writings
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  • From ANON - acr on November 17, 2005
    Wow. Really intense story. Very good. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Jzeylyn on November 16, 2005
    Wow! This is good! Please update!! I like how you've portrayed Harry as such a strong character.
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  • From ANON - thing 1 on November 16, 2005
    Very interesting first chapter. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Annie on November 16, 2005
    This is really good. I'm going to make a suggestion that I hope you don't take the wrong way and its not to criticize you but you really need to use more paragraphs. Its rather hard to read when you keep getting lost and re-reading the same few sentences. Other than that its a really good start. I really like the bitterness that Harry has as well as his....weary acceptance on inviting a man that he hated for three years into his home...er...base. LoL. Speaking of bases I like the way Harry denies the fact that his house is a home. I'm going to ask a stupid question now: can you post the letter? I really want to know what it says exactly to make Harry so...broken.

    Anyways I hope your muses are good to you.

    Happy Writings
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on November 16, 2005
    this has my interest.. i hope you update soon...
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