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Reviews for Undeniable

By : Maevenly
  • From Shadowjack1234 on September 24, 2009
    What....are they psychic? Why do they never talk? Eyes can't tell you everything.

    I was seriously lost after the part that confirmed it was Hermione. What would have been a great point to break into a conversation was made confusing by the whole 'asking questions and giving answers with their eyes' thing.

    It was SERIOUSLY well written, just confusing as hell.
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  • From ANON - Darkest Star on August 20, 2006
    Why aren't you a professional writer??? This is absolutely brilliant!!!
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  • From ANON - leonhart17 on December 27, 2005
    that was incredible - perfect! wow - You did an amazing job capturing them - the way they are, the way they relate - it was all great.
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  • From ANON - MaryJane on December 14, 2005
    This was one of the most incredibly written stories of this nature that I have read! It was wonderful. I felt like I was standing back watching Harry, watching Hermione. I felt like the voyeur. The writing was so very vivid! This is definitley going on my favorites list. Thanks for the great work.
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  • From ANON - Morgaine on December 14, 2005
    Woow!! This is the best piece of Harry/Hermione fanfic I've ever read!!! Great job! I'm deeply impressed!
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  • From ANON - Drago on December 10, 2005
    this is a great story so you should be proud of yourself for accoplishing suck an amazing feat of words that made the story something to remember
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  • From ANON - purebristles on December 10, 2005
    Hot. This is hot. Hotter than... this is just hot. Thank you for *fans myself* sharing this.
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  • From ANON - Setekh on December 07, 2005
    That... was.. incredible. Your description, and your storyline was just amazing. Talented writers such as you are few and far between but your intense description and the way you convey the scene was beyond even some professional style writers. You are an extremely talented author. I cannot begin to understand the amount of time and effort went into writing this and proofing this. Just deserves an extreme amount of respect.
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  • From ANON - Pyro on December 07, 2005
    You wrote that very well! FIVE STARS! i loved it! i never broke my eyes from the screen it was that intense. Do you have anything else on here? i'd love to read it!
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  • From ANON - belanna-sama on December 01, 2005
    This is the most hilarious sex scene I have ever read.
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  • From on November 29, 2005
    Simply beautiful, moving, bright and erotic...if this is a PWP, it is the best one I have ever read.
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  • From Finality on November 29, 2005
    Beautiful. The descriptions in your writing were absolutely awe-inspiring. It truly kept me reading, despite it's length, and the creativity was of a story you'd find in a million. Definitely a favorite of mine in my reccommended reading. Keep it up.

    ~
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  • From ANON - Skanky Hime on November 28, 2005
    Well ... wow ... that was pretty intense...
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  • From ANON - DarkWizardKiller on November 27, 2005
    WOW!!! What more can one say. This was without a doubt, THE BEST fan-fiction story I have ever read. Absolutely beautiful in every aspect of it's written word. I truly believe that your descriptive prose would win awards if you decided to use original characters however, It would not have the same sensual impact. You are a prolific writer with more talent than most! Thank you for sharing such wonderful talent.
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  • From ANON - Kagome Nguyen on November 26, 2005
    wow ... is this story a one-shot? i mean, umm ... Are you going to write more? hehehehe
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