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Reviews for Discovering the Hidden Heart

By : belladonnacordial
  • From ANON - angel on November 23, 2005
    ~lol~ that was great i love it ...i like how they are getting each other to open up ..... please please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - m on November 23, 2005
    interesting analysis of Slytherin politics and philosophies.
    Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on November 23, 2005
    A very hearty 'WELL DONE!' , dearie!!! Wow, what a great find your story is! I am very anxious to see where you are going with these two extrordinary(is that spelled correctly? Too lazy to find out!) characters. Poor, Hermione! What a sad beginning, but much potential for happiness with the help of the great Severus Snape! Keep up the great writing, love!!! I will be looking forward to more! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    New fan,
    Killer K :D
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 23, 2005
    Hermione's attempt at religious analogy was delightfully convoluted and almost had me rolling on the floor.

    Keep going, girl!!
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  • From slygriff21 on November 23, 2005
    Great chapter! I can't wait to read about their next meeting! This is an awsome story! Please update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - SnapesPet30 on November 22, 2005
    This is a really good story, I'm liking it very much. Severus is in a way the only who would truly understand what she is going through. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Maria on November 22, 2005
    I really enjoy the way you write dialogue - looking forward to more.
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  • From slygriff21 on November 22, 2005
    Great Chapter! I can't wait to read more. Please update again and soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Emmie on November 21, 2005
    Hello. Very good story. Kinda sad and lonely, but I like it. I will totally keep reading. One thing tho: grammar. You have lots of trouble with comma placing and some spelling mistakes. Other than that, nothing else. Very good. I can't wait for more. BTW, are you into French history? They were very into Liberty, Fraternity and Equality after the Revolution and that ended up on their old coins as well. Sorry, random, but that's just me... I see little things and make them big.. Well, keep writing and I'll keep reading!!
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  • From ANON - sweetdreams123@hotmail.com on November 21, 2005
    you write beautifully - i especially liked the parts about rocks. it was very subtle yet brought great meaning to the story. i look forward to more chapters. aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 21, 2005
    Yay quick updates! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on November 21, 2005
    The standard of the first two chapters is outstanding.

    At the end of the first chapter I had tears in my eyes. Reading the next chapter as calmed me to
    a certain extent, but I still feel for Hermione and to some extent Severus.

    Two souls in need of comfort and deliverence should make a hell of a story, one which I will be reading.
    Best wishes.
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  • From ANON - Ladytalon on November 21, 2005
    Hi! Loving the story so far, that remark "You are the stuff of legend any time of day" was hilarious!
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 21, 2005
    "He did wear that colour, but only to the Ministry..." My dear, you continue to outdo yourself!!! This is positively priceless!! :)
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  • From ANON - desolina on November 20, 2005
    lovely. i'll be bookmarking this one.
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