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Reviews for Discovering the Hidden Heart

By : belladonnacordial
  • From ANON - sheila on November 19, 2005
    I eagerly await the next update you are off to a wonderfull start.
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  • From ANON - Kat on November 19, 2005
    Ah! is it done? i hope not! if not, finish quickly!
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  • From ANON - jen on November 19, 2005
    I really like your story and can't wait until you update it. The new movie doesn't have enough Snape in it so I am glad I can get my Snape fix on AFF
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  • From ANON - mae on November 18, 2005
    Beautifully written. :)

    Am waiting for more
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 18, 2005
    I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! Can't wait to read more. Just one nit-pick, though- the Patil twins are Parvati and Padma, not Parvati and Padme. Padme is the princess/ambassador married to Anakin Skywalker in the newest Star Wars movies. Also, Parvati's the Gryffindor if it matters to your story at all. ~A
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on November 18, 2005
    I just absolutely love this line! It is the best I have ever heard to discribe his voice! "...to hear his cyanide almonds dipped in chocolate voice very near to her ear." Great chapter BTW - I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - wolfen on November 18, 2005
    Your writing is most excellent. You have really shown a post-war Hermione that is believable. Her emotions (or lack there of) communicate the horror of her experience. I can't wait to read more of this, and see how the situation between her and Snape develops.
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  • From ANON - Tigerrr on November 18, 2005
    I love it! The first chapter just drew me in... I can't wait for more! People may flame your mailbox to ash for it, but I for one appreciate a slow-building story.. makes the "reward" that much more exciting to read ;)
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  • From ANON - prahna on November 18, 2005
    You write very poetic prose. I love the way you describe Snape. Slow build is good. Just keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - Laura on November 18, 2005
    Wonderful. I love the rythm of your writing. It doesn't feel slow to me at all and I'm looking forward to more. You told a lot in that 1 page and very well I might add. Please continue.:-)
    LK
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  • From ANON - Severessa on November 18, 2005
    Oh, my God. YOU are now one of my favorite authors. I know that reviews should center around concrit, but I don't feel qualified to find something to criticize, even constructively. As a matter of fact, I cannot find something that isn't there. Just know that this is an excellent story, and one that I hope you can see through to the end. I am definately along for the ride!

    I am Severessa Snape, btw, just a lurker that sometimes reviews but always appreciates.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 18, 2005
    Um, this IS a parody, right? I thought the "dolphin hair" wand core was hysterical!! Please write more!!
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