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Reviews for Discovering the Hidden Heart

By : belladonnacordial
  • From ANON - skye on December 23, 2006
    I'm going to start this with the disclaimer of: I just finished a very-rough 12 hour shift at work, I had to drive home in a lovely freezing-rain storm, walked in to a huge mess of tree/decorations/wrapping paper everywhere as signifigant other got caught up in a computer game ( for three hours....grumble)end disclaimer

    sooooooo....I decided to sit, caffiennate and read AFF for a few minutes. FOUR HOURS LATER, and quite a few audible giggles/snorts and/or guffaws,I have come to the current end of your fabulous story. So to aid in the saving of my sanity, please feed your plot bunnies ( see soon to be arriving owls with P.B.U.N.S {Silent P like pnumonia} Plot Bunny Uber Nourishing Seeds. As well some C.L.A.W.S treats {Crunchy Little Animal WhatnotS} to make sure the Plot bunnies don't become C.L.A.W.S themselves.

    I'm off to get some very much needed sleep, happy writings!

    Skye
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  • From ANON - mirandler43 on December 23, 2006
    I actually audibly gasped when I saw that this story had been updated. Glad to see you back! I was sure this story had been left for dead. On with the praise: this chapter was very dialogue-heavy, which is a different side of Snape than most authors care to show but it's very nice to see for a change. Although Snape generally comes across as reserved, I do think that when actually given the chance to participate in a mentally stimulating conversation, he would become much more talkative. So, well done, and I hope to see more! Good luck with the next chapter. :D
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  • From ANON - Divine Angel on December 22, 2006
    I just finished chapter 11. I love your dialogue, your sense of humour is spot on. You seriously had me in stitches with:
    "Do they fly?"
    "Only on the M5..."
    Such sharp wit. Thank you so much. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - m on December 22, 2006
    Extaordinary Fic! Spot character analyses.
    Your blending of canon and potential future are so gritty but compelling.
    Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Divine Angel on December 22, 2006
    Alright! Alright! I'm reviewing. Cor.

    I just found this story today and have just finished chapter 8, 3 more to go atm. I'm very impressed; wonderful build up, excellent characterization, please keep up the good work. Now I must get back to chapter 9!
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on December 22, 2006
    I love, Love, LOVE this story! Eagerly awaiting next update!! May Real Life not suck for you, now and always.

    Elizabeth

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  • From ANON - amsev on December 22, 2006
    yes! A new chapter! I love this story, and love the dialogue between Severus and Hermione -- they really keep each other on their toes. I very, VERY much look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - swtcaro93 on December 22, 2006
    This is incredible. I haven't read anything that required so much brain power in ages. I feel drained. But it's worth it. Please update soon. I'm just about hyperventilating over the upcoming "near death" experience.
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  • From ANON - Augustine on August 30, 2006
    Along time ago i stumbled over one of your stories on Adultfanfic, discovering the hidden heart. It has been the best story i have ever read on AF, and i searched for it today, just to see if it was completed. It saddens me that it isnt, you show the characters in the exact same light Rowling does. You pin them perfectly, if not better than rowling. I beg of you as a fellow writer and lover of Fanfiction that you complete the story. It breaks my heart, that goddamn cliff hanger. I still havent given up hope even though its almost been a year since the last update. You are the most wonderful writer.
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  • From ANON - Anna on August 15, 2006
    I am loving this story and good idea about her checking Malfoy's books, maybe a bookstore in Knockturn alley might just have the information she's looking for. Just a quick idea there. I'm starting to get the feeling that once Hermione does put the moves on Snape, that he might just turn her down, citing the reason that she is under the influence of the parasite, possibly. I sense arguments of her sanity and freedom abrewing...
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 21, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on February 10, 2006
    CH: Ten...

    Please continue this. The rapport between Hermione and Snape is wonderfully written. He is neither caustic, nor too flowery, and she is neither too 'insufferable' nor to dim-witted. It truly is a remarkable tale you've begun to weave - the build up is brilliant.

    I love the way you've also interwoven some Natural American History into the story line as well, and I cheered quite loudly when Hermione told the Ministry to go shove the award up their arses... and Ron... and Luna - ESPECIALLY Luna. Only she could get away with something like that. LoL.

    I really do hope this continues, it would be sad if it didn't so, I beg you... Please update soon!

    Bek
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  • From ANON - amsev on February 02, 2006
    I LOVE this story!!!! Delightful and slyly witty conversation, with soupcon of angst as well as some building UST. "It is your Kneazle's good fortune that I settle for menacing anti-hero." I'm still chuckling about that sentence and your sly comment in one of your author's notes about Muggle politics. Very Well Done! I am looking forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - amsev on January 27, 2006
    Whoa! Excellent first chapter: What a stark description of battle, and Hermione's anger (the flipside of the coin called depression) and PTSD.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2006
    please please please update. I love the banter between them.
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