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Reviews for Discovering the Hidden Heart

By : belladonnacordial
  • From ANON - m on December 20, 2005
    Well written with interesting psychological analyses & original plot turns.
    (Holds cup up "Some More Please")

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  • From ANON - Jasmine on December 20, 2005
    Love the twist in this last instalment. I though it was just a psych problem. The path they take to get this thing out of her promises to be interesting.

    Keep up the good work.

    Thanks for writing this

    Jasmine


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  • From ANON - lovethelab on December 20, 2005
    The little fight at the end was just too funny! I had to laugh out loud! Well, more of a chorlte, but you get the idea. Great chapter BTW I am really enjoying this story. I was glad to see you had updated and now all I want is more!
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  • From ANON - Eliza on December 20, 2005
    I'm laughing and crying both as I write this, partial for the interaction between Snape and Hermione, and partially because I feel rather sorry that she's lost all of her friends...

    Good story, I'll keep tabs on it for sure.
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  • From ANON - bookwyrm on December 20, 2005
    "Temper tantrums were one of the first social tactics I ever learned and are still surprisingly effective. " How utterly Snape! And now I shall ponder various methods of treatment that Minerva would NOT approve of. They start out pornographic and go on from there. Smirk.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2005
    Wow. This is good.
    The parasite thing kind of threw me for a loop and I was feeling rather put out by it at first, but it doesn't feel so "out from left field" by the end of the chapter as it did at the beginning.
    Do update soon and often. This is a wonderful combination of wit and humor and is just sweet enough to be just about perfect.
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  • From ANON - niami on December 20, 2005
    you are a wonderful writer keep the great work flowing
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 20, 2005
    Ch 9 - What a fascinating chapter. I am totally captivated by it. You know it reminds me of a movie I saw wen I was much younger called the Tingler or something like that. It was one of those Late Night Fright movies that I loved. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 20, 2005
    Thankyou! for the update. I have to say i really am liking this twist to the story. Hmm i wait to see what happens now. I have to say you really got me hooked.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on December 20, 2005
    Ch.9 is the best so far...and just when I thought you couldn't breech the impossibly high standard set in the first two chapters. What a hellacious hoot!!! I'm starting to think that this would make a great musical........
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  • From ANON - DawnEB on December 20, 2005
    Much as I've enjoyed and looked forward to each installment of your story, I was wondering if it was going to head anywhere. Now you give us this parasite, and the story has moved forward considerably. Well done, and UPDATE!!!! (sorry, but I've just got to have more :) )
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  • From ANON - Obsidian_Hair on December 20, 2005
    Great story, though at the beginning of this chapter I got a bit list in the dialogue... I had to reread it, to get it. But it makes sense now! Like, nice and different. BadHermione always refreshing *grin*. Keep it up and merry christmas if you're not going to update before then!!!
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  • From goddessnape on December 20, 2005
    Warning: If you read this story you are in grave danger of being pulled in and not come up until it is finished.

    So there you have it... You have to finish it soon! Just think of all the poor souls that are held by this fic and cannot get out! Oh, dear God, what ever will we do? ;)
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  • From ExpectedAberrance on December 20, 2005
    I love this fic. Your characterization is wonderful. Interesting idea with the parasite in Hermione. I'm very curious as to where you'll take it. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - satyr on December 19, 2005
    So far so good. It's realisitc and good charaterisation. The skock syndrome symptoms are dead on as well to the aversion tendancies. Seems like poor Hermione is suffering from PTSD, but it's not extravagant or overdone. Very nice.
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