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Reviews for Discovering the Hidden Heart

By : belladonnacordial
  • From ANON - S.J. More on December 18, 2005
    I love your story and wish for you to please continue it!
    -S.J.
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  • From ANON - runner on December 16, 2005
    Hurry up and write some more! I am in agony waiting for what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Sea on December 16, 2005
    I just discovered this fantastic story today. So well written, looking forward to more. Well done!
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  • From ANON - Sheila on December 14, 2005
    I am really enjoying your fic. The little poem at the end of this last chapter was very amusing. ( I may have to borrow it soon hope that's OK with you). Please keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - cupotrevor on December 14, 2005
    wow..just found your story....i love your snape..and your story..update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - tak on December 14, 2005
    yay, so fantastic -just read all your chapters at once and now i want more.
    very beautifully written, looks like i've just found a new favorite author...
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  • From ANON - tulipsaside on December 13, 2005
    Great story... really loving it.
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  • From ANON - Siriusly Amused on December 13, 2005
    Every chapter is a gem. I should have reviewed each but could not stop reading. You do both characters well. Their interactions are sublime. No major criticisms. I noticed missing punctuation in chapter 7 and feel like a real heel mentioning it because this story is just great, easily one of the best I have read here or anywhere.
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  • From on December 13, 2005
    I can't remember if I've allready reviewed this. I love it. The last chapi was fun and a wonderful (if you could call it that) clifhanger. I'm waiting ever so inpatiently. keep writing!
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  • From Luxy on December 13, 2005
    You are fabulous! I can't wait for the next chapter... so hurry up! Just kidding, take your time :)
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  • From ANON - GaiaAthena on December 13, 2005
    hurry with the next installment! this is a fantastic story and I can't believe I waited this long to begin reading it.
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  • From ANON - Jaime on December 13, 2005
    PLease! I want and crave more of this fic! It is 430AM here and I have been reading for the last hour when I should be sleeping! More chapters please and quick!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lemon Head on December 13, 2005
    Nice biblical references, subtle but sweetly provocative. Excellent chapter! I will never look at strawberries the same way again. I'm starting to think you are too good at this to write fan fiction. Cute poem too.
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  • From ANON - Edania on December 13, 2005
    damn it, more!
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  • From ANON - Severessa on December 12, 2005
    Wonderful story, excellent chapter. I have no criticism for you, even the constructive kind. You write far better than I ever will. Please update soon.
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