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Reviews for Discovering the Hidden Heart

By : belladonnacordial
  • From ANON - firewall on December 12, 2005
    What a great chapter. First everyone should have a Room of Requirement to plan their lives. Second poor Hermione, her neurosis is worse than I thought. Severus is wonderful here. What a man, er wizard!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on December 12, 2005
    I loved your poem at the end so much I had to review. Really good chapter. I am glad that Snape now knows that Hermione is a bit worse off then even he realized. Too funny about Hermione not eating his offered meat even for lessons.
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  • From on December 12, 2005
    Ok, I'm hooked. I just discovered this fic (because I'm reading them in an odd order) and I'm now waiting desperately for another chapter. You evil fiend! *glower* I really do like it though, so keep writing! ;)
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  • From ANON - bookwyrm on December 12, 2005
    Hmmmn. Why the trip to the infirmary? I don't get it.

    How Slytherin of Severus to talk of raw beef (RED meat, unlike chicken or pork) then produce strawberries. Strawberries as snake heads, euch. I picture skinned, raw, dripping, decapitated snake heads. Double euch.

    But I still don't understand the trip to the infirmary. And I can't go back and re-read until I finish this review. Review in haste, repent at leisure.

    Yes, I did notice Hermione decide to pursue Snape. I liked the line about waiting until she graduated and then persuading him to forgive her, her youth. It's just that the following scene where she visualized snake heads sort of overwhelms the impact of her realization.
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  • From ANON - larana on December 12, 2005
    Love the story. I can't wait to see how it goes. Please post again soon.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on December 12, 2005
    Oops! Please insert "seditious" in place of "perditious" in my above review. I always get those those two mixed up!
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on December 12, 2005
    You've done it again, you purveyor of purposefully perditious, perpetually pleasing prose. Just when I was starting to recover from the last update!!
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  • From ANON - Hope on December 12, 2005
    Write please write
    your reading is never trite
    If you stop before they get together
    I shall make you wear and itchy sweater.
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  • From slygriff21 on December 12, 2005
    This is an awsome story! Sorry I haven't reviewed for your last few chapters! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope you will updating again and soon!

    Tiffany

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  • From ANON - WiloWisp on December 12, 2005
    Please Please Please continue writing this story! I'm truly enjoying it and getting completely sucked into the well done characters and the unique situation their in. I'm always looking for new updates so keep them coming and I'll keep reading. Thanks for a great story.
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  • From ANON - Willa on December 12, 2005
    incredible chapter, i loved it. please i want more!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2005
    I am but a sweet lass begging for you to continue
    Strawberries will always bring forth a faint memory
    of serpents heads because of you
    It is how my mind works and I am not complaining...

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  • From ANON - bookwyrm on December 11, 2005
    I am throughly enjoying your tale. It has a stately, almost courtly style to it yet manages to engage the reader rather than warding them off. In some ways the reparte between Hermione and Severus calls to mind the exchanges between Peter Wimsey and Harriet Vane. There is wit and wisdom in their conversations that is completely enchanting. I very much look forward to future updates and Thank You for sharing your work. I believe that you must do a lot of rewriting to achieve the degree of polish your efforts show.
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  • From ANON - Laura on December 11, 2005
    Still loving this one. Love the pacing, the rythm...just wish you'd update it regularly!! More, please!
    L
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  • From ANON - a_reader on December 11, 2005
    You've crafted an interesting friendship between the two. I'm enjoying the story thus far. :)
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