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Reviews for Discovering the Hidden Heart

By : belladonnacordial
  • From ANON - Hypatia on December 11, 2005
    Hooray for another entertaining chapter! My sides are still hurting from reading it, and I think I'll have to firmly tape my ribs before reading the next update.

    You go, girl!!
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 11, 2005
    LOL How about a review just because I want to? I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of this story. It has a good pace and it well-written. I'm looking forward to more chapters soon.
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  • From ANON - Hope on December 11, 2005
    Munch, munch...
    allright the story is progressing quite nicely, and I am very intrigued as to how you came up with the ideas as to what goes on during Oclumency.
    Now can you get them together soon, or at least get Severus interested in Hermione in a romantic way, I like fluff can you tell.
    Good writting keep it up, I prefer chapters to imaginary chocolate frogs they are much more enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - Toon Addict on November 30, 2005
    *starts crying* Holy shit woman you're so good! MORE MORE MORE!
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  • From ANON - Toon Addict on November 30, 2005
    *starts crying* Holy shit woman you're so good! MORE MORE MORE!
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  • From ANON - Annabel on November 28, 2005
    I cant wait for the next installment
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  • From ANON - Severessa on November 28, 2005
    Excellent insight into the characters! I think that you have a very logical outlook on Severus' history as well as Hermione's affect after the war. Good job. I really like this story, and I am glad that you are continuing it. If I were qualified to critique, I would say that more description of events would be good. It would also be in keeping for Hermione to come upon a memory that unglues her at some point in her "therapy". I also think that Severus would have those times, and maybe since they are talking about it all, he could let his guard down a little.

    Anyway, good job, and please don't think that I was criticizing; I don't have the guts to put a story on the Web in any fashion. I'm not worthy, I'm not worthy... :D
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  • From ANON - Annabel on November 28, 2005
    You are gifted. The dialog is outstanding!

    Snape, she realized was both shockingly rude and theatrically polite. He seemed to have no sense of moderation when it came to manners.

    Well, I now know more concretely one of the reasons my husband reminds me so much of Snape. I LOVED that!
    You are a clever, clever, CLEVER girl! I'd love to read something you've written with original characters! I certainly know you have it in you.
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  • From ANON - Annabel on November 28, 2005
    dialog... sometimes I can spell. This is the quotation i was asking about.

    'The scourge of curses all surpassed with just one good intention cast'.

    Where did this come from?
    A
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  • From ANON - Annabel on November 28, 2005
    Wow~ impressive dialouge...is that an actual quotation or did you spin that? Clever girl!
    A
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  • From ANON - Bambu on November 28, 2005
    Now I've finished all of your chapters to date. Other than thinking your Snape is a bit loquacious (even though you've given him reason,) I think this is a wonderful story. It's eloquent without being suffocatingly erudite, and I very much like the Snape/Granger interaction. Minerva reacting in such a Dumbledorian fashion is really so fitting. It's out of character for the stiff witch we've grown to know, but it's entirely in keeping with her mourning and showing a side of her we've never seen. Once more, I look forward to your future chapters.
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  • From ANON - Bambu on November 28, 2005
    I'm enjoying this thoroughly. You have an eloquent, visceral style which is quite refreshing. I'm delighted to see that you're working on your reflexive comma problem (although in some cases they're necessary.) If no one has mentioned yet, it's headmaster and headmistress (one word, rather than head master and head mistress.)

    I will look forward to your updates.
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  • From ANON - annabel on November 28, 2005
    I am enjoying your story so much! Whever did you find the facts about dreams? I'm going to do some research on my own now! Thanks for the inspiration. I love your Snape. Very clever the way you made him into a spy before he was a deatheater. very original. With all the fanfic I know that sometimes it's hard to feel that anything is original. I can't wait to read more but thought I would send a note telling you how very much I am enjoying your writing!
    Annabel
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  • From slygriff21 on November 28, 2005
    Awsome update! I can't wait to see how her first lesson goes! Update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Lemon Head on November 28, 2005
    Loved Snape's take on the marauders. Enjoying this a lot. Hey I read the rest of your stories too. Can't wait for Snape and Hermione to get to it since your sex scenes are the real cause of global warming.
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