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Reviews for Discovering the Hidden Heart

By : belladonnacordial
  • From ANON - angel on November 27, 2005
    wow the talk like friend not a teacher and student... i love it ...and why did Minerva change her hair color .... please please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Emmie on November 27, 2005
    Hello! I'm back again! I liked this chapter. It revealed a lot that I think JKR should tell us! You rock. you did have a few typos tho.. You spell Lilly like that but in the books it's spelled Lily. Just a heads up for next time her name comes up.. also, you left the r off a few times when you were trying to say "your." Other than that, nothing. Very good, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 27, 2005
    Oh my goddess!!!!! Hermione's description of poor Harry's travails ("frying chips"...,etc.) had me in total paroxysms. I'm still chuckling! You have no idea (well, maybe YOU do....) how much your delicious prose lights up this site.
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  • From ANON - mysticsong on November 27, 2005
    This is a lovely story. I hope to see more of it!
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  • From ANON - ToonAddict on November 26, 2005
    You HAVE to update! This has gotta be one of the best Herm/Seve fics I've ever read. Cant wait to see a lemon from you!
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on November 26, 2005
    Brilliant, doll!!! What a wonderful little gem you have here! All this building up to Snape and Hermione's romance is torture, but in a good way!!! It will make the inevitable so much better! Great job and I can't wait for more! Happy writing, mi chicquita!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
    Hugs and kisses,
    Killer K :D
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  • From ANON - Emmie on November 26, 2005
    Hello. Back again! I liked this chapter, but not as much as the other ones. It seemed a little slower, but it was still informative. Don't worry, I am not expecting every chapter to be exciting or suspense full. It was a good chapter, it just didn't seem to catch me like the others did. Have no fear tho, I will always read it as long as you write it! Also, I've noticed that your grammar has improved. I haven't seen any mistakes in a while! Good work! Much Love,
    Emmalline
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  • From ANON - Gem on November 26, 2005
    Excellent stuff - keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Laura on November 25, 2005
    This story is just wonderful. I love their conversations and their chemistry. My only complaint is that I have to keep waiting to read more!
    L
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  • From ANON - Lemon Head on November 25, 2005
    Lots of interesting ideas here. They would have an intellectual courtship. Could dream himself pharaoh and still not get laid. That was great.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 25, 2005
    ~lol~ man i love there meeting ... please more more and i hope the headmistress say it is ok for mione to study with snape.... and i wonder what other dreams snape will have ...please update soon and keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From slygriff21 on November 25, 2005
    Great update! What did Severus's dream mean? If anything. I can't wait to read your next chapter! Keep up the awsome writing!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Gem on November 23, 2005
    this is very good, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 23, 2005
    I am totally intrigued with this story. I hope you update soon and often.
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  • From ANON - Emmie on November 23, 2005
    Hello there. Still very good. I like that you only this to us an hour at a time, one piece of the puzzle at a time. You also have a good writing style and you are not too verbose as some writers are. Also, your commas were MUCH BETTER. Very good. I didn't notice any other grammar or spelling problems either, so I'm impressed. I love history too. I'm not too fond of the 1600's, but they'll do. I like the 1700 and 1800's as well as 1300-1500s. That is the Renaissance time period and I love all of that. The 1700's is Revolutions, fancy monarhies in France and lots of other cool stuff. So your of history is not lost on me. If you get a chance, stick in somemore subtle history things.. it's fun to try to find them. Well, keep writing and I'll keep reading.
    Emmaline
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