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Reviews for Trial by Fire

By : Marvinroom
  • From ANON - Cappuccino on December 13, 2005
    Great chapter! I love the way Draco is so sweet and calm. It's great seeing Harry, Draco and Ron get along for once. I absolutely adore that he wishes to court her rather than demand and possess. It's so sweet!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on December 07, 2005
    Great Chapter!
    I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2005
    ME like Me like Me like!!!! Update soon
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  • From ANON - Sexy Relly on November 30, 2005
    Please update soon cant wait
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  • From ANON - moxie on November 29, 2005
    more please!
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  • From ANON - Cappuccino on November 29, 2005
    Great story! I like the countdown thing. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - intcrimgrrl on November 21, 2005
    interesting take on the whole veela thing - instead of massive fighting, they're approaching it maturely. Spelling needs serious work, however, especially chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 21, 2005
    Great chapter!
    i can't wait to read more.
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  • From cruttan on November 20, 2005
    Hey there Ivy!

    There were many things Hermione could take in a day. She had developed in all the years with Harry a ridiculously high tolerance for pain but this just pushed her over. Draco could be and arrogant, self absorbed prat, that she could handle. She reveled in handle that Draco. But calm and logical Draco just shut down her brain.

    LOL! This cracked me up. I also thought that Hermione's reaction to Draco's announcement was spot on- whatever it was she said about him not being able to tell her what to do with her body.

    It's intriguing. Calm and logical Draco is refreshing, but I hope that we still get a bit of the snarky Draco that we know and love! :)

    Will be looking for updates!
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  • From ANON - choosetoremainanonymous on November 19, 2005
    you could go far with this...i understand time crunches, but longer chapters would be much better. i take it this is a veela fic...? there's nothing wrong with your writing and the storyline looks good, but not much has happened so far, so it's hard to tell what's going to happen. keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 19, 2005
    oo, I like it so far. It sounds good.
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  • From cruttan on November 19, 2005
    It's an interesting take on an old plot line. I do love Veela Draco, so I could definitely get behind it. I liked the end of the chapter- that Draco knew exactly what was going on and stated so quite bluntly- that's our boy!

    It does feel a tiny bit rushed- the presentation of the material, but I certainly understand the problems presented in starting off a D/Hr fic. Obviously something has to give (w/regards to JKR's plot- Death Eaters, Voldie and such) in order for them to even be a feasible pairing, which is always the trick. I think the way that you handled it is valid though, I just like lots of time to enjoy the unfolding of the setting for our favorite couple :)

    I'm really looking forward to reading more of this!
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