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Reviews for Expectations

By : elle6778
  • From ANON - Stacy on November 22, 2005
    Wow! Great story! I love it so far!
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  • From ANON - 2bfoundwanting on November 22, 2005
    Oh no, i think i wrote what i meant wrong. I mean that your SUMMARY made your story seemed like it had a used plot, but after reading your story i realized that it wasn't. I like this chapter, very well written. Your characterizations are thought out and well done. Cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - Mia on November 19, 2005
    Good first chapter, defnitely. Although I wouldn't expect Ron's parents to not let him go. Sure, they'd need much convincing, but I'd expect them to let him go, being as Harry is his best friend and all. But I'm not complaining. It's your story, after all, you have your reasons.

    This is definitely one of the few stories I'd stick around and wait for. Intriguing, yes.

    I'd love for you to keep it that way. I'll be holding my breath until your next update.
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  • From ANON - dam on November 19, 2005
    a very good story so far. the character portrayals are believeable and close to canon. I like the way you have delevoped the storyline, with interesting snapshots of the main characters' perspectives. i hope you get a chance to update soon, I'm going to enjoy reading the rest of the story!
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  • From ANON - Erin on November 19, 2005
    I liked the pace of the first chapter. It seemed to involve all of the characters central to the plot, and the way that Hermione was tricked into touching the portkey was smart.
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  • From ANON - geo on November 19, 2005
    I like it so far. Keep it up and I'll keep reading it! thanks, geo
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  • From ANON - 2bfoundwanting on November 19, 2005
    I wasn't sure how this fic would be from reading the summary, it sounded a little like it would have a used plot. But you write very well and you really draw the reader into your story. I think that it will turn out to be wonderful, and i can not wait for more!
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