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Reviews for The First Heartbreak of Severus Snape

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Sarah on June 09, 2011
    This is one of the best Severus Snape stories I have ever read. It is a dark and deep insight to the man who would grow up to join Voldermort and serve as a spy for Dumbledore. Great Job!!!
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  • From ANON - darklori on January 22, 2010
    It wasn't an ugly story, it's definitely cruel, but never ugly. It was well-written, well-thought of and though it may hurt some adoring snape fans, what he's done is truly understandable. You bite a snake, he bites back. Take it from a girl tormented and hurt throughout high school...
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  • From Quasi on November 18, 2008
    Genius. Pure genius.
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  • From ANON - Kaley on June 23, 2007
    I have loved everything you have written and this story was phenomenal. I like Severus like this. Stories which paint him soft and soppy seem to me bland and "mills and boon-ish" - like they are not really about him. Severus' character isn't warm and fuzzy. Sorry to have to admit that Subrina's treatment at his hands didn't seem like that much of a punishment to me (pensive aside). Thanks for all your wonderful work which I have only recently discovered. Kaley
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  • From ANON - Sally on January 24, 2006
    You go, girl! It takes guts to write stuff like this. This had the sourest lemons on the market, but hey, it makes the lemons in your other stories all the sweeter.
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  • From ANON - JW on November 26, 2005
    I just read this in one shot - well-done, although I wish SIRIUS had been punished more. Hmm, perhaps all the Hogwarts girls saw what happened and avoided Sirius? But Lily Evans Potter still made Sirius her son's godfather... nope, Sirius should've been punished more. Perhaps another story? Thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - MaryElla on November 23, 2005
    WOW! That was an emotionally powerful story. It was very well written, and your description of the situation was clear. It truly made my heartstrings twist under the strain. The end wrapped up a little quickly, I would have drawn it out a bit more. Yet, as a short story it was, and is, a well crafted treasure.
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  • From ANON - Provocateur on November 21, 2005
    Hypatia: I certainly did mean original characters ;). Bellatrix and Narcissa would be rather boring. Kinky, yes - but boring nonetheless (unintentional rhyme).
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 21, 2005
    Provocateur-

    Just as long as they're original characters, and not Bellatrix and Narcissa. Those two bore me to death!!!
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  • From StoryJunkie on November 21, 2005
    I think that this was well-thought out, planned down to each grisly detail. It enthralled me, perhaps more than I wanted to. I noticed you didn't really touch down a great deal on the girl's side of things, I really felt sorry for her, thanks to the cold situation. It's about territory and dominance, and you hit the nail on the head with that one. Its about not being ever able to go back to innocence. You portrayed Snape's character well. (was he always so cold?, yes, I think he was.) awesome.
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  • From ANON - Provocateur on November 21, 2005
    A down n' dirty story free from misogynistic undertones involving the one Severus Snape is probably a fabulous idea. Many a' willing lady will take a savage pounding from a dark and quasi-sinister man who gets her juices flowing...

    It would seem I'm in a filthy mood tonight LOL.

    Can I recommend sisters for this imminent tale of delicious debauchery? Perhaps they can be daughters of upstanding, pious parents who espouse only the squeakiest, cleanest, sparkliest values imaginable. Ah, I love the smell of juxtaposition in the morning!

    ;)

    Feel free to dismiss my ramblings lol.
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  • From Ms_Figg on November 21, 2005
    Hyp: lol. Not a bad idea. Hmm. Randy, dark young Severus cashing in on his dirty pensieve/deatheater status. Still in brutal "give 'em what they think they want" mode. Sounds delicious to me. Now one or two women? Mother and daughter perhaps?choices, choices. Wipe your mouths, ya'll. I can sense the drool. I'm drooling a little myself. :::eg::: lol. Will see what twisted scenario I can come up with. Maybe some pureblood witches who want the dark mark, down in the lower levels of Hogwarts. Not from Slytherin either. Hmm. Thanks Hyp. I'm geared.
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  • From ANON - Deadly nightshade on November 21, 2005
    well i think that this story was just as good as the rest having read it i can understand why Severus was the way he was you are a fantastic author i love your work and cannot wait till you wrote another one
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 21, 2005
    Umm.. Ms. Figg..??

    Putting all the negativity and misogyny of the previous story aside....we will overlook your lack of a suitable apology for the moment..

    Perhaps you can find something inside you to write a steamy, pornorific story about Snape and WILLING females (Slytherin or muggle) residing in the dark time of his post- graduation from Hogwarts......before he kowtowed to Dumbledore and became the Potions Professor?

    O.K.. I'm really not panting......I'm merely being suggestive.
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  • From ANON - Provocateur on November 21, 2005
    Ms_Figg,

    Thank you for clarifying the purpose of your story. The problem I had with it didn't have so much to do with content per se, but more to do with that I perceived to be your - dare I say 'permissiveness' - of the actions Snape took. I'm glad to hear (or perhaps 'read' is a better term?), that you did not intend to condone his angst-ridden counter-attack.


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