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Reviews for A Piece of Forever

By : lissie
  • From ANON - ANGELATMYFEET on January 06, 2006
    OMG IT IS SO GOOD! I really love your storyline --- it's very original! And I really like Loki (I think that's how you spell it). It creates a new and interesting relationship, even though the story isn't primarily about Harry and Loki. Also, I truly agree with you on Pansy --- she makes a very good person, and in most of the other fics, she's pretty much (but not always) labeled as 'the-bitch', or 'the-person-who-ruins-everything', etcetera, etcetera. Draco Malfoy is a little OOC, but I think in this story (which is one of the few ones where Draco's OOC-ness actually makes sense) it is really vital. But it also makes sense since they (Harry, Ron, Hermione, Draco, etc, etc) have been out of school for a few years and things could have changed.
    I can't wait for you to update! And keep going! You're really good!

    -ANGELATMYFEET
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  • From ANON - TNgirl on January 04, 2006
    Cheers to Pansy and Narcissa(maybe, I hope she tells Draco the truth!!)!!! I hope it works!!! Maybe they'll kick Lucius and Alyssa for me!! THEY deserve each other!!!
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  • From ANON - Daniel on January 04, 2006
    I like this story and I hope the truth will come out soon!
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Savannah Griffin on January 03, 2006
    I truly enjoy reading your story because of all the drama as well as all the lemony goodness. Can't wait to read more chapters and hopefully everything will come together nicely as well as having a very happy ending.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on January 03, 2006
    OK Lissie I know the Character's are not yours but you know what I think that you should do? I really think that you should find out how to get in contact with J. K. Rowling, and make this into an actuall story...I think that you are really good at this and you need to continue on with this for a long time....make it more sneaky....more...suspenseful...I hated Alyssa btw and Draco belongs with Hermione...Dang I cant wait for the continuance.
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  • From ANON - jen on January 03, 2006
    okay i dont know why that last review says...anon b/c its my reivew...
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2006
    love it abosolutly love it. mannn i wish it was longer though! i hope draco finds out about alyssa losing the baby and i hope they break up ...mannn im on the edge of my seat anticipating...update update update!! ill keep reviewing as long as u keep updating!
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  • From ANON - blondiexoxo on January 03, 2006
    oh the mom should go get a copy of the agreement and give it to loki and put it inn the paper and be like alyssa.... is a fake ..... and lucius ..... lol i dunnno but ya thats what i think hehe ttyl
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  • From ANON - rox on January 03, 2006
    Well what can i say...other then i just loved the chapter hell i just really love you're story..
    and i really can't wait what is going to happen..
    i'ts like becoming an addiction hihi...
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - Sarri-chan on January 03, 2006
    Oh please, please continue! It's nearly killing me! I totally agree with Pansy, and I want to smack Draco and Hermione upside the head for being so stupid. You have got to write more!
    Please!

    ~ Sarri-chan
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  • From ANON - ShortieGirl on January 03, 2006
    It is really good. I really hate Alyssa though get rid of her!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on January 03, 2006
    Great chapter!
    Man, Alyssa sure is a bitch,lol!
    Oh, ya, i have a question. Why was Hermoinie sorry?
    Like, when she traced the "S" on his back? Was it because they couldn't be together?

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  • From ANON - LiYan on January 03, 2006
    Is it wrong for me to want and point and laugh at Alyssa on how wrong she is about Draco loving her?
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  • From ANON - mstrsofmayhm on January 02, 2006
    I looooooooove it
    update update update
    the last few recent chapters have made me so sad
    you're able to put so much emotion into it
    it seems so real
    i l ike everything
    everything everything everything
    except for alyssa; she can rot in hell; i wonder if she's going to die...*hint hint hint* nah. that'd be too easy for draco and hermione.
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  • From ANON - Audrey on January 02, 2006
    Yay! Finally things are getting better!
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