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Reviews for A Piece of Forever

By : lissie
  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on November 29, 2005
    Still amazing... I'm gonna wager a guess that Lucius had a hand in Draco and Hermione's breakup, and if so, I hope Draco grows a spine before the end of this fic. I love it and I think you are a marvelous writer. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Erin on November 28, 2005
    I think it's really good and really sad. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. Your writing is amazing and I already want them back together. Plus, I want that Alyssa girl dead. I'm so horrible sometimes. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 28, 2005
    Awww...that chapter was so sad!
    I almost cried.
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 28, 2005
    Wow, that was great, I can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lensa on November 28, 2005
    Ok....YOu must continue! I wish your chapters were longer, but your characters are very interesting...Please update soon


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  • From ANON - Bridget on November 27, 2005
    I like it so far. I can tell that you are really trying to make it a good story, not just something you threw together. I think you should contiune writing it because I do see a lot of potential in what you've written so far, although you could easily put your prologue and 1st chapter together. I don't know if you have your whole story planned out or not, but if you don't you've given yourself a good deal of room to work with. I don't quite understand with Draco was at a church, but maybe it makes sence to you. Also, how old are they souppsoed to be? Anyways, keep up the good work, I really like what I have read so far.




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  • From ANON - jenny on November 27, 2005
    its SOO SOOO SOOOO GOOD i love it i love it u should keep on writing this story cuz ur a talented writer i luv this story and plz dont stop until its complete lol
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 21, 2005
    Great start, man, i'm dying to know what he has to tell her!
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