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Reviews for Darkened Lust

By : Ami
  • From ANON - Catpower on December 08, 2005
    Wow! The illustration really conveys the movement and tension of the moment. Lucius looks a lot sexier than Severus - but then, I think he does in the films too. Nevertheless, it's still Sev that I love - he has hidden depths.
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  • From ANON - Catpower on December 07, 2005
    Wow! That was so filthy and sexy. It must be amazing for you to read the porn you've written and see your own name in it. The mind-link thing was incredible. Severus obviously intends to uncover every single inhibition in Ami and Becca and force them to verbalise them and then (gulp) experience them.

    Let's hope it isn't possible to "use up" one's sex drive by trying everything so that there's nothing new left to see you through the rest of your sex lives. Cos if that is possible, then I'm sure your Severus could do it.
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  • From ANON - crazy aurora on December 07, 2005
    One of the best stroy I read!!!!
    I want MORE MORE MORE MORE!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on November 29, 2005
    An excellent story. And I'm amazed to think that Ami and Becca really exist! How brave and confident you two are to actually appear as characters in an explicitely sexy story. I don't think you are Mary Sues. I can't help wondering about your real sex lives. After all, there are no Snapes in real life (are there?).
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 23, 2005
    I honestly liked this story, but thought that there might be just be a little too much "Mary Sue" to make it palatable to many readers. Foe future reference, please omit mentioning absent husbands, present stepchildren, etc. Readers of erotica like to imagine their heroines unencumbered. They want an escape from the everday life...not a reminder.
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  • From ANON - MaryElla on November 23, 2005
    Sorry about the previous review. The grammar was just butchered..*blushes*...I do have a basic grasp of such things as the English language; just not at certain times. For example, when I am more concerned with ousting the idea out of my head and into words. I just felt the need to explain that.

    And just to reinterate my previous reviews point...excellent job! :0)
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  • From ANON - MaryElla on November 23, 2005
    I have to admitt that I am not a big M/F/F fan, but I am enjoying the interesting experience of reading this story. You have decent character development and some plot, especially at the end of chapter thirteen. I am wondering if this is something that will turn into a deeper plot or is this something meant to be an amazing experience for all of them. I would like to see a deeper plot, but that is just me, and that isn't saying that what you have thus far written is in anyway inferior. I think you are a talented writer and have a firm grasp in this story, and hope that you continue to write.
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  • From ANON - anon on November 23, 2005
    not sure why there are no reviews yet...but excellent story...I also wish you would finish the "Rape of Bulma"....
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