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Reviews for Punishments of a carnal nature

By : botonchan
  • From ANON - ryoko on November 26, 2005
    i luv u! keep writing!
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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on November 26, 2005
    oh this will be hott.. update soon..
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2005
    sounds good can't wait to see what you will have snape do.
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  • From ANON - Eloradanin on November 26, 2005
    kewl, you've gotten my interest peeked. keep it coming, pardon the pun.
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  • From ANON - Lady Desu on November 26, 2005
    It seems interesting.. If not a bit overused. There were a couple mistakes and the diolouge was in a werid format. Also, I lost some respect for you when you asked for at least 5 reviews.. I mean. You have to write for YOU. Not REVIEWS. If you can't write because you like to write. Then. Well. I can't explain it. But you should write for yourself not to get praise. Anyway. I guess update. Sometime.
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  • From ANON - Catty on November 26, 2005
    *g* I'm looking forward to more! ^_^
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  • From ANON - momoko on November 26, 2005
    interesting
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  • From ANON - JiyuHatellKodai on November 26, 2005
    *Snickers*
    *Giggles*
    *Laughs*
    *Evil Laugh*
    Buzzzzz
    *COUGH HACK WHEEZE* DAMN FLIES!
    Continue plz!
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  • From ANON - Ari on November 26, 2005
    Not bad, has some promise.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix 5 on November 26, 2005
    Please continue
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  • From ANON - Umi on November 26, 2005
    good so far, but try and seperate lines of dialog? each new line should be created when a diffrent person talks, that way 3 people arn't talking in 1 paragraph, which gets confusing when reading ^^

    update soon
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  • From ANON - Tonie on November 26, 2005
    It was pretty good for a begining. Hope you post some more soon
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  • From ANON - n0b0dys_ang31 on November 25, 2005
    *thoughs of Harry in a french maid outfit, holding a feather duster come to mind* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
    Seriously, keep going
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  • From ANON - Luciusdrache on November 25, 2005
    this seems interesting
    will love to know how the slytherin lover is
    Do i detect blonde hair????
    Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - SilverPhoenix on November 25, 2005
    i really hope you update..id right a longer review but honestly im to depressed...*hugs* update soon?
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