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Reviews for Punishments of a carnal nature

By : botonchan
  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2005
    this is a great beginning update soon!
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  • From ANON - mwah on November 25, 2005
    I don't even know where to begin. What is debouched? And what color is chameleon? One of the most basic writing strategies is a new paragraph for every speaker.... Please get a beta.
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  • From ANON - trixi on November 25, 2005
    i would like to see this expanded into a story more then just a one-shot maybe? i think you may have a premise worth exploring here...anyways, please continue.
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  • From ANON - peniquedeplata on November 25, 2005
    Oh, the possibilities are mind-boggling! more soon please.
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  • From ANON - En4cerMax on November 25, 2005
    I'll review! I'd like to see how much he will make Harry do. Hope it's full of smutty goodness. :)
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  • From ANON - Demon on November 25, 2005
    WAhhh!!! update I have to know!!!! please update soon ^-^
    This is good so far...very good start
    Yay first reviewer ^-^
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