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Reviews for The Creature Within

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  • From ANON - AcidCat on November 26, 2005
    WoW!!! That was HOT :D I like it a lot :P
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2005
    Omygosh! Harry/Draco/Voldemort! That is so hot! it's the first time i've heard of them all together. Please continue with this, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From fractal on November 26, 2005
    Oooh very nice! I loved your characterizations, Voldemort especially. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Annie on November 26, 2005
    I really like this, its a great start and I love threesomes, creature!Harry and mates. I hope you update soon because I really want to know what happens next.

    Hope your muses are good to you.

    Happy Writings.
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on November 26, 2005
    Creep tacular *shudders* dude.. first and foremost.. how in teh HELL did they get a HOLD of Harry POTTER???? but other than that.. continue
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  • From ANON - yamimana on November 26, 2005
    I really love it so far. The idea is great.
    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on November 26, 2005
    I absolutely LOVE it!!!

    Keep up the awesome work, coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Kat Potter on November 26, 2005
    Mmmmm i liked it. Can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Yana on November 26, 2005
    poor Harry lol
    will he escape
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  • From ANON - Athena on November 26, 2005
    I liked that, I look forward to more updates again soon. I hope Lucius got punished for hurting Draco like that.
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  • From ANON - volume on November 26, 2005
    how soon is soon?:)
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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 26, 2005
    I liked it...and I'll ask you to remove that "it will be bad" comment from the disclaimer. There are a great many stories on this site that should be considered "bad", but yours is not one of them.

    A misplaced semi-colon which should be replaced by a comma...pfft! You're doing 100 times better than many.
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  • From ANON - Storm on November 25, 2005
    I LOVE IT!!!! Please quickly update. Chapter one is very promising and interesting and I'm already hooked. Die Lucius Die! No better yet, give him to me, I'll punish him on Draco's behalf! ;) Now to unearth my handcuffs and such. (**hehe jk**)
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  • From ANON - cottoncandy on November 25, 2005
    GOD! That was great! Very interesting and sexy. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Weathered on November 25, 2005
    It is very interesting so for, and I cannot wait for the next installment!!! Keep up the good work :D
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