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Reviews for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Jamie on November 30, 2005
    This is fabulous. In fact, I just stumbled upon all of your stories not too long ago, and they are all quite wonderful and well done. I must say that I love Eli the best...such a crafty little elf. He's perfect for the snarky and oh-so-sexy potions master. ;)

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Stormi on November 30, 2005
    Chapter 15 - You have just given them a very interesting twist. Go Eli!
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 30, 2005
    Eeww. The scene with the prostitute really sullied Snape for Hermione, I think. I would have preferred it had he wanked off while thinking of Hermione in naughty ways. I think the only way to redeem yourself here, Ms. Figg, is to let our heroine have a similar experience. What's good for the gander.....
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  • From ANON - angel on November 30, 2005
    man snape need some lovin' and so does mione .. i cant wait in till your next chapter ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Maela on November 30, 2005
    Yeah...you're right. That was kind of cold and empty. I am glad that you didn't have Hermione and Severus together at this point though. I'm looking forward to the tension between them for a while. :)
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  • From Ms_Figg on November 30, 2005
    JW: I really did consider her just asking him, but it would have been too fast. It's only her first weekend at the Manor, and this Hermione isn't easy. She's horny but not easy. And plus, he is still the snarky potions master, sexy yes, but still perceived as cold and untouchable. She needs to see something from him that tells her he is willing to accomodate her. Or get to the point where she feels he needs her. At least she knows he likes women lol. Patience, JW I warned you this story would be long. Oh and he did ask about the male prostitutes. I posted the wrong version. It's fixed now.
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  • From ANON - JW on November 30, 2005
    Ch 16 - yup, that "cold lemon" was right for the storyline and for where Severus is in his development. Hopefully, that's his last time there. I'm certain that he would enjoy Hermione a lot more, and she would be very appreciative! C'mon, Eli - spike their brandy! (BTW - I notice he apparently didn't see any male prostitutes there and didn't ask Asmerta about any, but I think he stopped thinking of Hermione completely at the Diggs.)
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on November 30, 2005
    Garghh!
    What a nasty place to leave us hanging. I have to go to bed now, in order to be able to function tomorrow.With that end...

    Damn you!

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - JW on November 30, 2005
    Ch 15 - well, why doesn't she just ASK him to be her "gigolo" for the night?? I can't see him wasting his money on a brothel when she's right there. Besides, they both already have the Death Eater association working against them - would be very uncool for either of them to be seen leaving a brothel, where Bozo could snap them, since Bozo and Rita now have both S&H in their sights. C'mon, Figgy - lemons! But not brothel-type lemons.... (wheedles)
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  • From ANON - Shadow Raven on November 30, 2005
    Ha Ha!! Oysters...that Eli has one dirty imagination! ^_~
    Anyway I can't wait to see the next Chappie. *bows to authoress*
    Shadow Raven
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  • From ANON - lilly on November 30, 2005
    This another awesome Hermione and Severus story to put under your hat. I like it alot and I do hope to read more by you. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - jane on November 30, 2005
    This is fun, I am enjoying it immensely
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  • From ANON - siriusluv on November 30, 2005
    Oh, you are such a tease. Are they really going to talk that much about sex and not do it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 30, 2005
    eli knows what his master needs ... please more ....~lol~ later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - becca on November 30, 2005
    bold hermione, i like her. wonderful as always
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