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Reviews for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Muggleman on November 29, 2005
    hmmmm sneaky snape fear he lost her job my ass lol good story update soon
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  • From ANON - kris on November 29, 2005
    I love this story! I think it stands for itself even without the lemons! You have done a great job of fleshing out your characters, and making this story a great read! Keep updating ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Koda on November 29, 2005
    I'm glad she finally realized that Professor Severus Snape is one sexyass bastard.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 29, 2005
    that mean old hag ... man what will happen now .. please please update soon

    angel
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on November 29, 2005
    Hyp: lol. The house elves won't get in the way. Or, if they do watch, they'll probably be invisible. Hmm, now that's a question. Do house elves watch? Anyway, more than likely they have their own quarters to retire to at night. Or Sev could order them away.
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  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 29, 2005
    We interrupt this marvelous moment to bring you some unwanted con/crit. The story, so far, is incredibly knocks-your-socks-off for the time being, but.....

    Those house elves.

    Yes, I know Snape Manor is huge, and requires a lot in the way of domestic assistance, but 70 FUCKING HOUSE ELVES???!!!!! How is Hermione to get her groove on with Snape, knowing that there are 70 house elves on the premises???

    Eli is of course an exception. He might watch their eventual fornication with tears of reverence in his eyes, BUT WHAT ABOUT THE OTHER 69????!!!!

    Maybe house-elves get Sunday afternoons off or something.
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  • From ANON - Stormi on November 29, 2005
    Chapter 12 - Rita is a bit....... but she did play right into Snapes plans nicely. Write more soon please.
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  • From ANON - Niami on November 29, 2005
    GOD! I love this story so much, please keep writing. This is very well written i love the way you write, keep up this wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - Stormi on November 29, 2005
    Chapter 11 - Forgot to write ..... GO ELI!!!
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  • From ANON - Stormi on November 29, 2005
    Chapter 11 - Too cool. Wonder how Severus will react when he finds out Hermione was spying on him. Guess it will be tit for tat. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Maela on November 29, 2005
    Rita Skeeter is an evil tramp!
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  • From ANON - JW on November 29, 2005
    Ch 12 - yup, I see see Rita's writing style as more fitting to a column than to a straight news article. More room for her to place unsubstantiated rumors!
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  • From ANON - Koda on November 29, 2005
    Crazy Rita bitch. Next chapter, for their reactions, please? ^^;
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  • From slygriff21 on November 29, 2005
    Ohhh! I can't believe Rita! I can't wait for your next update! This story is awsome! I can't wait to read more!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - JW on November 29, 2005
    Ch 10-11 - yes, Eli!! Hmm, time to send Raucous to Rita with a special message? Heh-heh! If I were Hermione, I'd tell the Ministry goodbye and wouldn't even look back once! Thanks for updating!!
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