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Reviews for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - denise on December 08, 2005
    love it!! actually so does my husband. pretty funny actually. he came into the room and saw me reading so he started to read too. then he took me to the bed and fucked me just the way severus fucked hermione!! very hot!! any way, keep updating!
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  • From ANON - snapeslave on December 08, 2005
    ms figg...is that it...is that the last chapter of this story...oh god i hope not...this is such a wonderful story...and so much untold yet...please continue with wonderful story...keep up the good work'

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  • From ANON - firewall on December 08, 2005
    Ch 49 - Awww, poor lucious Lucius. What goes around comes around.
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 08, 2005
    Ch 48 - Oh dear heaven to be a platter for that wizard!!! Whew! what a chapter.
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  • From ANON - Willa on December 08, 2005
    oh CRUEL!!! but totally sweet payback for that bastard!
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on December 08, 2005
    This is the last comment I will write on the rape scene. It may be offensive, but Lucius is offensive, he sexually brutalizes his wife, he'd sexually brutalize Hermione if he could, he's sexually brutalized, raped, tortured and murdered countless innocent people, and never paid for any of it, plus avoided justice for years. In most cases no one deserves to be raped, and I might just have a twisted "eye for an eye" sense of justice, but I think rapists, sexual abusers child abusers deserve some of their own medicine. Lucius was always on the giving end, and had NO remorse about it. Finally he found out what it was to be on the receiving end. The chapter stays.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2005
    That was really gross. I've been reading the rest of the story, and for the most part, I like it. (it doesn't follow canon and an AU note would be a good thing to put in the summary for those expecting a story to follow the books). But this really was too much. This fic is otherwise a pretty light-hearted erotica with plot, but the cruelty/torture you just described in the last chapter does not fit in with the overall theme. There is nothing remotely funny about a man being raped in jail and no one "deserves" it. If it had been a woman, would you have written a scene like that? I think only if you were writing a dark and disturbing fic. Not this one. I don't want to tell you how to write or what to write, but I can only reiterate that I don't think this last chapter belongs with the story. It doesn't fit and is on the offensive side.
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on December 08, 2005
    Loved Lucius getting it up the end. Oops, meant in the end, or err... You know. Love Revenge.
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  • From ANON - Severus'_Student Proper on December 08, 2005
    I would say I feel sorry for Lucius, because he is sexy and all, but he killed his son. So SCREW HIM! Literally. :)
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  • From ANON - Severus'_Student Proper on December 08, 2005
    Wow.... hmm... now I'm hungry. No, really. I want some food!!
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  • From ANON - Severus'_Student Proper on December 08, 2005
    Go Narcissa! That's what I like to see.. a woman who gets what she wants. Heck, I think I'll party with you!
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  • From ANON - Severus'_Student Proper on December 08, 2005
    Hmm. I wonder if they sell those in stores? The Severus Platter. . . I want one for Christmas Santa!!!
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  • From ANON - elsa on December 08, 2005
    I don't know what to say I really don't. I liked Severus and Hermione storie but as for Lucius I have no comment, No Comment at all.
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  • From ANON - a_reader on December 08, 2005
    That is the best revenge on Lucius that I've read yet. Take that!
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  • From ANON - Kasiie on December 08, 2005
    It's about damn time Lucius got what he deserves!!
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