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Reviews for A Maid in the Devil's Manor

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Hope on December 08, 2005
    That is almost too cruel, almost. Actually what i think child molesters and rapist deserve. Excellent writting, now can we please go back to Severus and Hermione I want a happy ending wedding and kids, which I am sure they will have since they have not used a single contraception spell. WEEEEE!
    Thank you so much for this story.
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  • From ANON - Koda on December 08, 2005
    Funny, I watch that one episode of the Boondocks about a guy afraid of being anally raped in prison, now I read this. But, damn, poor Lucius.. Did I just say that? ugh.
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on December 08, 2005
    OK Figgy...I read this entire story from beginning to end in one sitting! I saw you post it and told myself to wait....wait....wait...I can not stand cliffhangers!!!! But....I had to do it. I was weak for some good...erm...writing? Anhyhoo....I really loved this one. Much lighter than most of your others. I was laughing through most of it and excited through the rest. I did indeed enjoy this one, almost more than WWIT. But not quite. Still your best work, by far. Well, here I find myself once agian, wondering when Figgy will update. *Sigh* I do love your stories so.
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  • From ANON - Jamie on December 08, 2005
    Ms Figg -

    Thank you so much for the prompt and understanding response. I agonized over that little review for ten minutes, trying to write it in a way that would both express my thoughts but not be insulting. I'm so glad that it wasn't taken as such! I really appreciate the warning disclaimer. =)

    I so look forward to new chapters!


    - Jamie
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  • From ANON - SyXX on December 08, 2005
    I'm greatful for the Harry/Ron update - weither because of my suggestion or because you already planned it that way...It fit in nicely with the story...As for Lucius, we'll I didn't like it, though he deffinatly deserved it...Good work!
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  • From azulkan2 on December 08, 2005
    Glad he got his just deserts! Looking forward to the next part.
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  • From ANON - Laura on December 08, 2005
    Mwahahahaha! He got it in the end all right! *evil chuckle* Loved that, MsFigg!

    Oooo, the lemons are plentiful! More, please! :-) Very well done.

    Laura
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  • From Ms_Figg on December 08, 2005
    Jamie: I added the disclaimer to chapter 49 warning about non-consenual sex M/M as you suggested. I didn't write the scene as humorous, though my comments with the pun was pretty light concerning Lucius' rape.. But I think Lucius got what he deserved, not just because of what he did to Snape but for the horrors he committed and enjoyed committing against so many people of all sexes and ages when he was a servant of Voldemort. He got from Bawdin no more than he gave.
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  • From ANON - droxy on December 08, 2005
    ouch
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  • From ANON - Jamie on December 08, 2005
    Err... and by "Neville was added" I mean to the story, not to the lemons. O.o
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  • From ANON - Jamie on December 08, 2005
    To be honest, I was really enjoying the story pre-lemons. I know, I know, this is Adultfanfiction.net, and lemons belong here. It was just something of a shock to go from telling a really interesting story about the tension between two people working out the cure to the Killing Curse to -wham- little but sex. (The addition of Neville was especially fantastic.) I hope that for a continuation of lemons balanced with more on Rita, Harry, Ron, and Snape as an intelligent, complex man as well as a demon in the sack! =D

    I only have one real complaint. Lucius is an utter bastard, this is true. But did that merit a humorous rape scene? Rape fics can be fascinating if written well, but to be utterly frank I found the rape for a laugh sickening, exacerbated by having been blindsided with it. If possible, I'd like to suggest that a warning disclaimer be added.

    Thanks so much!


    - Jamie
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  • From ANON - calamitysandra on December 08, 2005
    As if we have ever needed a break from your lemons!
    And tasty lemons that were. Yummy!
    I love the elves, they are great.
    Lucius got his. Good!
    And now, back to the lemons!

    Sandra
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  • From ANON - Ms_Figg on December 08, 2005
    Megan: maybe next story I will make him darker and crueler to Hermione. A short pwp story probably. In this story Severus is only nice to Hermione, and is still a bastard to others, though he hasn't really had an opportunity to show it much because the story revolved around the two of them interacting. He doesn't have much of a conscience actually. For example, he's never going to tell her what he did to get her to the Manor. Ever. He is always motivated by self-interest and getting what he wants. Conscience be damned.
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  • From ANON - Brianne on December 08, 2005
    aw...poor Lucius...not.
    Totally got what he deserved!!!
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  • From ANON - Phrynia on December 08, 2005
    I really dont know were you come up with the smut but I love it!! You have quite the imagination.
    HAHA!! Lucius got what he deserved!! Please update soon.
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