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Reviews for Union of Three

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  • From ANON - Ryu-chan on December 09, 2005
    Hehe, that was funny! Rons such an idiot. How can you just tell a huge secret like that in front of supposed death-eaters??!Duh! Somebody should put him on a leash before he does more damage.
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  • From ANON - Ryu-chan on December 09, 2005
    P.S. that review is based solely on the first chapter. So dount have a go at me yet. There may soon be some praise forth coming...
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  • From ANON - Ryu-chan on December 09, 2005
    Wooooow...had a Star Wars moment when you said Voldemort was Harrys father....its so like *in Darth Vader voice* I am your faaaaaaaaaather...* insert deep ratteling chain-smoker type breathing*

    A tad cliche perhaps???

    And couldn't you have just stuck to giving Harry one super magical being type heritage? Sorry, its a bit much. And a bit unoriginal. On the bright side at least you didn't ALSO give him a veela heritage...we all know Harry is overly wonderful and can jump buldings in a single bound as well as all sorts of other interesting stuff but hows about you give him something to develope later in the story ???

    Sorry for the critisism. But hey if I didn't think yer story had potential I wouldn't be reviewing...


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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on December 09, 2005
    Damn, Lucius is really growing on me, and I swear, this is now my favorite threesome. Your story is just hot as hell, and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 08, 2005
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - Saske's Iris on December 08, 2005
    I hope he was mistaken too, can't the pregnancy wait until later?
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  • From ANON - PinkPenguinPrincess on December 08, 2005
    *mpreg dance* Pregnant Harry's so much fun! Specially pregnant Harry who fights Voldie during a mood swing...... *giggles* Thanks for the amazing update, I look forward to the next one!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 08, 2005
    another great chapter! please update soon
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 08, 2005
    noo is not the time
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  • From ANON - Newtype on December 08, 2005
    Sweet chapter hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Akume on December 08, 2005
    Yes! Another fabulous chapter. Keep up the good work. So, Harry might be pregnant good job. I can't wait for the follow-up.
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  • From ANON - angel on December 08, 2005
    oops .... they didn't know that ... please please update soon i would love to read more ..and were is the locket..... in till next time later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - sweettee on December 08, 2005
    please up date this story soon please this is a very awesome fic about Lucis Harry and Draco. I also would like to find out if Draco and Harry are going to be parents soon. please email me when you up date at sweetteetwo@yahoo.com

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  • From ANON - Asher's Iris on December 08, 2005
    bwahahahah "a lion their pack animals ya know" bawahahahahah omg (deep breath)hahahahahhahah chuckle chuckle this story rocks harry is the cutest thang and love the malphoys and creature fics are my favorite. in short your story entertains my interest very well. I look forward to more and every chapter has thus far met expectation. It is rather a whirlwind adventure, one could almost say a bit rushed but still enjoyable. Please update i look forward to it so.
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  • From ANON - Morgan LeFay on December 08, 2005
    AAAAAAHHHH!!!! no more chapters!!! please post more soon *grovels*
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