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  • From ANON - tali on January 21, 2006
    haha holy shit,.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    LOVE IT !!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!! please!

    I love it

    geo
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  • From ANON - Kenda on January 21, 2006
    Wow I loved the new chapter. It's the verbal teasing and banter between Draco and Hermione I think that makes your story stand out so clearly. It's witty and cleaver while still having the most incredibly erotic moments such as the 'Anais Nin' scene from this chapter.

    And what a point to finish on too! I can't wait to read the next chapter and see The Weasleys reaction to the article, inparticular Fred and Geoge's dismay at having their thunder stolen and Bill's reaction maybe.

    Than you for another brillliantly enjoyable update.
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  • From ANON - Ravenfire on January 21, 2006
    It was a smaller chapter but perfect none the less. Oh I adored the way you wrote Anais Nin into the chapter...brilliant! And I love how Draco's seeing a potential alliance with Luna. Just a perfect chapter to further plot and smut and you did it wonderfully. I feel bad for Draco...he's going to be hunted down like a mangy dog. And poor Hermione...she has to deal with the Weasley's and *gulp* perhaps even Bill looking at her and Harry...is not going to take this well. Wow! I hope you update soon and thanks for putting me on the update list *beams*.
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  • From ANON - angel on January 21, 2006
    I love your story and would love to be on your update list. I hope your new update comes in soon because I can't wait to see what happens
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  • From ANON - Bek Allen on January 21, 2006
    Oh my goodness!

    Yet another wonderful chapter. I've loved the way you've moved things slowly between them and the fact that you've got a firm ally in Luna. Your smut is just wonderful - trust Hermione to discuss literature (even if it is erotica) in the middle of something so... sexy.

    Where you've ended it though... that's just EVIL! I can't wait until the next update. Please do so soon! Once again, it was a pleasure reading a new chapter.

    Bek
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  • From ANON - Danielle on January 21, 2006
    I really love where you are taking this story! Its amazing!!


    BRAVO

    I just hate where you left this chapter! I cant wait to see the twins reaction to Hermione stealing their spotlight with Draco and everyone reaction to them being together!

    Update soon!!
    D
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  • From ANON - Latricia on January 21, 2006
    *mouth hangs open* Shit! How the fuck could they get caught? I thought they were so careful. But on the other hand, i guess they were bound to get caught with all that public display of affection. Don't you?

    I love the oral scene; and how she had so much control over her tone when she talked to him. I don't normally read that in stories, and that is definately a plus.

    I wish i could have been there to see Draco's morning appearance and his facial expression when Blaise read the Sunday paper. That would have been priceless. But some faces i want to see is her friend's expression. Now that would be something i would pay to see; over and over again.

    Oh yeah, i was suppose to ask you: Where do you look for these references for your stories? I mean i've never heard of most of them until now and i got to admit they do go so well with this story. Are you a Literature major or something? If not then are you a Greek major?

    Anyway, until you get the other chapter up, so long

    This chapter was BRILLANT

    Much love

    Latricia

    2006
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  • From ANON - cherii_emrei on January 21, 2006
    at least the picture was not of them at the Garden the night before! ;) lol
    I find that Opera date to be bad planning on the characters' part, and goes against Draco's thoughts in the most recent chapter - about choosing muggle venues because it was easier to hide. Hmm, Draco dear you took her on a date to the Opera. High society etc etc, that's not very secretive!
    Can't wait to see how Hermione handles the news, especially since she's going to the Weasley's the morning.
    Why are the twins so obsessed with public attention? I don't recall any mention of why.. though I should double check.
    Anyhoos, thanks for updating!! Great new addition, can't wait for the next one!

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    OMG!!!! i love the story!!!! u must update soon!!! i am dying here. wuts gonna happen?!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2006
    OMG!!!! i love the story!!!! u must update soon!!! i am dying here. wuts gonna happen?!
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  • From ANON - oetbmalfoysmom on January 21, 2006
    Ah, bliss.... A new chapter AND a mention in the AN! I regard that as an honor considering the many, many reviews this story has attained. I've certainly done my best to recommend "Tin Angel" anywhere I can. Once again, you never disappoint. This chapter was wonderful. Hermione mirroring Draco's literary lovemaking was precious. Although, keeping coherent thought whilst in the throes of passion is quite a feat. If any characters can successfully pull this off, it is definitely Draco and Hermione. Intelligence and wit make up the bulk of their attraction to one another in the world of fanfiction. You outdid yourself with the witty banter but what really stands out for me is your attention to the details in the beginning with Draco's concentration focused on Hermione's loose curls. Too often, her "bushy mane" referenced in a story becomes cliche. You turn this feature into something desireable and sexy. Bravo on the numerous nominations you have received. You deserve each and every one. I'll certainly be voting early and often. Thank you once again for satisfying my seemingly unending need for excellent fiction.
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  • From ANON - Bob on January 21, 2006
    Adding poems and literature into the story is a great idea, infact it made the intimate moments between Draco and Hermione so much more beautiful and fulfilling.

    Bob
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  • From ANON - oetbmalfoysmom on January 20, 2006
    HELP! I'm going through "Tin Angel" withdrawal! Please have pity on a D/H ship junkie. A one chapter fix, that's all I need~
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  • From ANON - kenzi on January 17, 2006
    loves it!!!! can't wait for the next chapter. :) I'd love to be added to the mailing list as well :) punky_monkey34@hotmail.com
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