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Reviews for Tin Angel

By : AraLuna
  • From ANON - Edleen on January 15, 2006
    OMG, I'm in LOVE w/ your story, over Xmas break I kept thinking I'd miss updates so I'd be eternally grateful if you added me to your email update list, thnx.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on January 15, 2006
    I'm not really sure as to how reviews work, so in case you didn't get it from the post, my email address is lachrymalice@gmail.com.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on January 15, 2006
    Breathtaking.

    I'm vowing right now to read every piece of writing you've referenced.
    Any tips on finding them?

    And I'd love to be on the list for email updates.
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  • From ANON - NAR on January 14, 2006
    I don't think I've ever read anything like that, ever. I don't usually like fluff, but that was very well done. Draco is very sweet, sentemential, I don't want to say sappy because it has a negative connotation, but he's very, very romantic. He's not a believable canon, but considering that you've elimated most of canon, it's a pretty good fanon. Tin Angel is highly versatile for other fandoms, which I amused me for a bit. I like all the allusions to great literature you have, especially to Milan Kundera- he is one of my favorites. It gives Tin Angel much more depth, but I think you should tone it down. It's fanfiction. Also, although you write very well, and the readers are eager to learn what happens next, there's really no point to it, nothing terribly compelling other than your nice writing. Though plotless, happyhappy-joyjoy is very enjoyable at times, I think it would be much better if we saw a bit more conflict in Tin Angel.
    You have great taste in literature.
    Excellent job and please, email me when you update.
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  • From ANON - freda on January 13, 2006
    I love tin angel. Great writing- esp Neruda. Please update soon, I am almost as horny as Draco!!! Do you have other fics that I can read? Please put me on your update list.

    thanks,

    Freda
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2006
    OMG!! You are amazing! This is such an intelligent fic. I love their 'banter'. I love that they're both adult, with their own lives and meeting like this. Chapter 5's erotic scene was BEAUTIFUL. I love it. This fic is just oozing with so much sexual tension, so much desire, constraining until they just can't take it anymore! Ah! It makes me want to date someone new just for this feeling. I love that you take the time to draw it out. I love how you focus on their relationship, I love that you don't write about the days in between and how they miss each other. You keep giving such wonderful interactions for us to read, and maintain the plot.. and ah. I love you. :) I'm tempted to go out and read all those books you referenced! This is such a beautiful fic, and your effort shines through. Not only that, it's a romance fic with smut so whooooo!! Re: Bill and the diamond ring; my bf says the same thing - should I be wary about this? lol Man oh man. Wonderful story. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - lica on January 12, 2006
    I loved your fic! It was very erotic but not at all in a bad way. I'm actually very impressed with your extensive knowledge of books and poems. Is this your first fic because it seems to me that you're not at all an amateur in writing? I also liked the way you've portrayed Ron here because in most fics he just seems like an uncaring idiot who is too insensitive to even have an iota of feeling in his body. I would like Harry to have a bigger role here too because the Weasleys overshadow him. Luna is also very funny. I never thought of her as someone who was very open and someone Hermione can call her closest confidante. If I don't seem too forward, I'd like to suggest a bit more interaction between Draco's friends and Hermione's friends. It would be a lot more interesting if there was a conflict between the two parties. I hope you update frequently and can you add me to your email update list? I'd really appreciate it. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Jezz on January 12, 2006
    I'm not good at constructive criticism, I just want to say *damn*, this is a good fic. I love all the literary references (and have added several to my must read-list), the clever dialogue, and the realistic characterizations. Very, very well-written. I'd love to be added to your email notifying list thingy, as I rarely visit this site but really want to continue following this fic. :)
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  • From ANON - fluffball on January 12, 2006
    This is quite possibly one of the best Draco/Hermione stories I've read in a long time. Your story is just so wonderful. I'm at a loss for words to descirbe it. I don't think you have to worry about writing any erotic scenes. You've got it down perfectly! I'll be eagerly waiting for your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Telperaca on January 11, 2006
    Hi ya!

    Once again, I loved your chapter 4. I've not got round to reading chapter 5 (you'll know...) and so I hope I get to read it asap!
    The HG and DM romance so far seems quite romantic as well as quite believable so far. It's interesting to see where it's going to go from there...
    Hehe.
    I wonder what'll happen when everyone else finds out who she's seeing!

    Well, time to go home!
    Hoping for more updates...

    Telpy.
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  • From ANON - kuroneko on January 10, 2006
    i really liked this chapter! you did a wonderful job of portraying hermione's and draco's thoughts and feelings. i cant wait to read more from you! :]
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  • From ANON - guitarchix on January 10, 2006
    this is just a really good fic, well written, interesting and actually the sex parts aren't so out of character that it makes you think it is a chessy harry potter porn. anyways really good job, honestly
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2006
    i loved it. update soon
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  • From ANON - someone on January 10, 2006
    Great chapter. No, the sexual describtion was well written, couldn't write better myself.
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  • From DaOnleeSam on January 10, 2006
    WOW... Thats was amazing. Update soon.
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